Back to 1987: From the Start, I Talk My Sister Out of Getting Married

If you just delete the character of his sister, the quality will increase by at least 50%.

⬆️Those characters seem to live next door, and their quarrels and hugs are full of the fireworks of life.

When you see your non-biological sister, you know you are thinking about your older sister, beast

Chapter 3 persuades you to quit. Does the prodigal have to quit drinking when he comes back? You won't drink in business from now on? Wei took the initiative to lend you 10 yuan, but you didn't want it. Just now, he was thinking that it would be good for Wei when he got rich in the future, but it turned out that he was unwilling to borrow even this little money. He said that it was half of the property in his pocket, but he pretended to be generous when he had no money in his pocket. The antenna was also given away as promised, so why couldn't he accept the 10 yuan and use it in his pocket? It's too noble, it's poisonous

The biggest flaw is that he and his sister don't know each other clearly. It's really disgusting.

After seeing this, I have no desire to continue reading.

It's getting more and more outrageous, it's not natural at all. I can't stand the idea of ​​having a random relationship anymore. It's called a mess of words when written.

Let me not talk about the plot writing first. The sentences don't make sense. How did you do it? How did you manage to say "Is what he said true?" Without saying anything for a whole chapter? Who said that? What did you say? The plot jumps around at every turn. In one sentence, they are talking in the room, and in the next sentence, they go to m78 Nebula to play Pretty Cure. I'm not asking you to write brilliantly, at least make your sentences fluent, right? One second the protagonist was talking to the other two people, and the next second the villain came over and surrounded the protagonist, and the other two people disappeared out of thin air. Did he run away, get beaten together, or die immediately when he saw someone coming?

There are many mistakes and it doesn't look good, so give up decisively! Rate it 2 points

I felt very poisonous after seeing half of it