The Dragon Descends the Mountain

I admire you for writing so many chapters. I can't stand it until I reach 12 chapters. It's such a mess.

The novel is so illogical. Some of the protagonists' names are different at any time. One day it's this name, another time it's that name. The author didn't take a break, okay? Zhang Guan and Li Dai are confused.

This book should be called "Licking Dogs Down the Mountain"

Lots of typos, but great content.

There is no beginning or end, the names are written randomly, and they are all wrong.

The author's memory is not good, the names are all wrong, and the writing is too clumsy.

Don't you proofread the manuscript when writing a book? ? The names of the characters are all wrong, which is irresponsible. If this continues, there will be no readers! !

What the hell are you writing? It has no beginning or end.

Character names are messed up, making people confused.

It's a bit of an appendix, and the plot can be just that I don't know how it will end at the end. You can continue writing this type of novels, the overall picture is very good