I Am Immortal A

It's true. The plot starting from the White Dragon Gang is really poorly written. How many times have I met the White Dragon or other gangs and would rather kill three thousand by mistake than let one go and be killed directly? This way, with a powerful government, you can still be the best in the country. Without a royal background, you can't get through it. How many times have you gotten into trouble like this and it hasn't been enough to teach you a lesson? I go under the eyes of the White Dragon Gang every day and think that there are countless people dressed the same as you. The White Dragon Gang can't recognize you. I'm wrong. There are so many lessons that show that as long as I see you, I will be deeply attracted to you and then mess with you. With you, the protagonist has the mocking face of a protagonist, but doesn't have the protagonist's abilities. Since I've pissed you off so much, why can't you go in the dark and kill the parents of that Zhou villain? Not a single sentence is the fault of a godfather. I can't even sit down to apologize for your mocking face. The most outrageous thing is that the wooden box is placed under the floor, and then you are wanted and have to go home. You can tell at a glance that there is something you want in the house, but there is no precious money in the house. Moreover, you are such a low-key and ordinary person, and you are a second-rate martial arts master. You can tell at a glance that there are always good things in the house. Basically, everyone who lives in the world knows that if there is no good thing in the house, it must be hidden, either under the bed, in the partition of the wall, or under the floor, or just under the floor tiles. A group of villains still can't find it? Is there a different space under your floor? As long as seven or eight people each take a wooden hammer and knock it along the floor or wall, the veteran will know that there is a problem. I really don't understand what's wrong with your author. Obviously there's nothing wrong with the rest of your writing, but the setting of the plot is really a piece of cake.

Why did you let him go? Your reason is to attract the energy of the White Dragon Gang. This reason is really ridiculous. First, you two are not currently surrounded and can leave at any time; second, do the White Dragon Gang know your true identities? I don't know, so how do you attract energy afterwards? Third, I'm chasing you, but I don't know your identity, so I can only conduct extensive searches. Think about it, how many times have you faced off against the White Dragon Gang because your identity was discovered? It's never been like this, it's always been the case. So what is his use? Regardless of whether he is present or not, they will be searched. Regardless of whether he is present or not, as long as they encounter the White Dragon Gang, they will have to fight. As for why you shouldn't let him go, first, aren't you afraid of raising tigers? Second, why are you so confident? Aren't you afraid that his talent far exceeds yours? And then kill you? Why do you, a passerby, pretend to be so cool that you can capture and control everything at once? Thirdly, even though you let him go after doing so much to you before, I didn't see that he would be worse off than dead in the future, right? So why would you do this? Promote the plot? It's too stiff. The writing is good and the descriptions are OK, but the development of the plot is too jerky, not only here, but also in other places.

Although no one is watching, I still want to explain [Happy Zongheng's system has recently been revised, and there will be problems such as confusion in chapter numbers. It should be fine once the backend is stabilized. Again, just read it as you like, this book is probably going to suck, there are too many questions, I'm preparing a new book, I hope I can write an interesting and complete story

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