Lin Chen transmigrates to a fantasy world and, from the start, is framed by his senior sister and thrown into prison. A good-for-nothing, he is destined to languish there until he dies.
Just then, a System called "Breathe to Become Stronger" activates.
All he has to do is breathe to grow stronger.
[Ding! Congratulations, Host, you have received the reward: the supreme cultivation technique, Grand Void Great Hand Seal!]
[Ding! Congratulations, Host, you have received the reward: Eternal Sacred Body!]
[Ding! Congratulations, Host, you have received the reward: a century of cultivation!]
And so, determined not to leave the mountain until he is invincible, Lin Chen quietly stays at Mount Shu, breathing his way to strength!
But when the peerless evil demon sealed three thousand years ago ushers in a dark age, Lin Chen's voice thunders through the heavens: "I am the Great Emperor of the Human Race!"
Are online articles nowadays becoming more and more childish? Even if it's a system article, don't be so childish, right? Breathing becomes stronger? Will you become stronger if you eat again in the future?
No buddy, you are just sugar with three spoons. You have inherited memories and feelings through time travel. Yu Hengzi treats you as his own son, but you can't even find a reason to give him the pill? Even if you make up Jade Perry's soul body, I would feel better as a reader. As you wrote, your godfather is almost dead and you can't think of a few reasons to give away the elixirs, so you just put them away and wait for better ones. What, you have a reason to give out better elixirs?
Okay, okay, the system deleted this book. It's messy. Is it because the author has a bad memory? How old did the author feel when he was 18?
The subject matter is good, but the author is not. The protagonist has the best holy body in the world, he has heaven-defying skills, he has a cheating device that rewards experience, he has top-level elixirs to assist him, he has top-level weapons, everything is top-notch, and it is very difficult to upgrade. Others are only two levels behind him easily. It took several months to practice Qi Perfection to the day after tomorrow, but his junior sister broke through from the fifth level of Qi training to the day after tomorrow. How can this be justified? The author can write whatever he wants, and it falls apart. You promised to be invincible in the world, but you are weak-minded and take action. Are you going to kill him directly without killing him, leaving behind troubles in the future?
A disciple came to the sect to provoke others. He tried all kinds of tricks to kill people and even injured people. He actually let others go like this. He was quite good at following the rules for his own people.
You can make up whatever you want, how imaginative is it? What's the boundary? If our own people cannot enter, the enemy can enter?
Not bad! Very pretty
After reading Chapter 15, I have already made mistakes several times. The first time the protagonist wrote about the acquired perfection state, but then he wrote about breaking through the acquired state. This time it was even more excessive. A person who was at the seventh or eighth level of Qi Condensation was written as the first level after the acquired state. It's strange that such a article can be good-looking.
I want to press him to the ground and rub him
If you still write a novel like this, you should find a factory to make screws.