Start: Swallowed the Dragon-Slaying Knife

When someone hurts him and scolds him, he feels a little cowardly if he doesn't hit him back.

What kind of ghost book is this? The language in the front and back is often not fluent. Some places go around and around and I don't know what I'm talking about.

What the hell, just take my punch... Are you a primary school student? I probably can't even read what I wrote.

The title of the book is good and attractive…

Tang Ruhai was sitting in the hall, watching the law enforcement hall arrive at the inner hall. I found that they were like eggplants beaten by frost. Are you referring to the male protagonist or to Tang Ruhai? Is this smooth for you? Do you think you are talking about Tang Ruhai's inner monologue? , If you are writing about the male protagonist, just write it like this. I was sitting in the hall, watching the law enforcement hall arrive. In the inner hall, I found that they were like eggplants beaten by frost. In this way, I found that the use of these three words would not be so abrupt and not smooth. But what you are writing is Tang Ruhai sitting in the hall. Suddenly I found that it was inexplicable. Is it the author? Did you find it or was it Tang Ruhai or the male lead?

The rating of your book is very low. There are only thousands of people reading your book now. I won't talk about other things in your book. Your sentences are not fluent. The preface and the follow are often inconsistent. After writing the book, you must check whether there are any problems with the fluent sentences? , You never check it?

When you write, can you check to see if it makes sense?