Xu Yuze traveled from the future back to a month before the Hundred Ghosts Night Parade.
And activated the most powerful Heavenly Master system!
At the beginning, in order to attract the attention of the Supernatural Bureau, he went on a live date with the SS-level school beauty Li Gui.
In front of tens of thousands of people, a battle between humans and ghosts was staged directly in the hotel.
At this moment, all the melon-eating people were excited.
"Now if I invite a girl out to watch my cat do a backflip, her life will be in danger???"
The SS-level ghost was exposed, and the whole country was shocked. The leader of the Supernatural Bureau contacted Xu Yuze immediately.
Xu Yuze: "No further talk, I have handed over this SS-level ghost to you. In another month, hundreds of ghosts will walk at night. I need you to cooperate with me to achieve the goal of universal immortality!!"
Leader of the Supernatural Bureau: "??? Wait a minute, what you said is a bit informative..."
Too much nonsense, a lot of nonsense, is it interesting?
The pace of the plot is too slow, and some unnecessary foils should be deleted
First of all, the structure and concept of the story are good, and there are few writings in which the identity of the reborn person is revealed. So this reverse thinking is also quite attractive. But the only bad thing is that there are too many narrations and too many words, although it is more detailed. But the whole chapter only contains a few things. It can be covered in a few sentences, but it is too lengthy. Some places are too out of the ordinary. There are many fighting places but they are not very detailed and can be brushed off in one stroke. For example, in the chapter about the pair of school beauties, the details of the ghosts, the details of the fight, and the moves or skills displayed by the protagonist were too sloppy. (Just personal opinion)
The author lacks love and is so ruthless that he will not let go of ghosts.
I don't know what I'm writing at the beginning of Chapter 146. It's completely disconnected from the previous chapters. It's a mess.
Among them, the resurrection of the martyrs is a bit interesting. The martyrs' unyielding will is to protect the compatriots even if they are dead when the enemy invades. The others are just ordinary. Generally speaking, it's okay.
Regardless of whether it looks good or not, I will leave a footprint first.
Give me a good look, this thief is good-looking, I am thinking in reverse.
Too much talking. 1-8 Photos are all chatting. Are you playing?
The author writes well, the book has a strong setting, we support each other, let's work hard together, don't stop updating 137
Too much nonsense, a lot of nonsense, is it interesting?
The pace of the plot is too slow, and some unnecessary foils should be deleted
First of all, the structure and concept of the story are good, and there are few writings in which the identity of the reborn person is revealed. So this reverse thinking is also quite attractive. But the only bad thing is that there are too many narrations and too many words, although it is more detailed. But the whole chapter only contains a few things. It can be covered in a few sentences, but it is too lengthy. Some places are too out of the ordinary. There are many fighting places but they are not very detailed and can be brushed off in one stroke. For example, in the chapter about the pair of school beauties, the details of the ghosts, the details of the fight, and the moves or skills displayed by the protagonist were too sloppy. (Just personal opinion)
The author lacks love and is so ruthless that he will not let go of ghosts.
I don't know what I'm writing at the beginning of Chapter 146. It's completely disconnected from the previous chapters. It's a mess.
Among them, the resurrection of the martyrs is a bit interesting. The martyrs' unyielding will is to protect the compatriots even if they are dead when the enemy invades. The others are just ordinary. Generally speaking, it's okay.
Regardless of whether it looks good or not, I will leave a footprint first.
Give me a good look, this thief is good-looking, I am thinking in reverse.
Too much talking. 1-8 Photos are all chatting. Are you playing?
The author writes well, the book has a strong setting, we support each other, let's work hard together, don't stop updating 137