When the world of mortals rolls around, I become an immortal. When others practice cultivation, I lie flat.
Luo Yunge travels across the continent of cultivation, has a lying system, practices for ten thousand years, and nine generations in one, he can become a worldly immortal.
But the path of cultivation was bumpy. After the eighth life, as a disciple of Butian Peak, he originally wanted to live a stable life, but unexpectedly the nine senior sisters could hear his voice, so the ninth life that made people laugh and cry began...
1. The protagonist originally had a system to lie down, but he was noticed in the sect, and there were many things.
2. The protagonist pretends that his level is too low and is easily ignored by others, which can easily cause trouble.
3. The protagonist is obviously not high in level but still likes to show off and slap people in the face.
4 Every senior sister can listen to his heart
Well written, don't write it next time
What are you writing about? You can even it out yourself.
After nine lives, you still need to listen to others. You were knocked unconscious and taken away. How did you live before? It was like this at the beginning. It is hard to imagine that this is a person who has lived for nine lives. He was extremely poisonous from the beginning.
This author, I want to tell you something. If you look at this book from an outsider's perspective, what type do you think this book is? Of course, this book is in the mind-reading genre. Here you have to think about it, in which direction does our enthusiasm and reason for reading this book develop? Of course, I read this book to see the empress see through other people's minds and hear other people's voices. However, the content you wrote about these plots is really very little. This is the crux of the problem. You should write more about what you think in your heart and be heard by others, so that you can retain readers. I read this book It's just to see what kind of expressions other people are thinking about. The content you wrote is too far away. You wrote too little content about being read by others. If you are still interested in developing in the direction of mind reading, I suggest you write another book. I suggest you write more chapters about the type of things that others can't read.
This writing is so peaceful. There seems to be no ruthless people.
What the hell are you writing about? It's okay at the beginning.
Coming
"The Gods Come, I Created the Myths of the Heavens" came to visit and collected it. I hope to pay you a return visit.
It's too bad, I can't see a bit of it
Messy, verbose, verbose
1. The protagonist originally had a system to lie down, but he was noticed in the sect, and there were many things. 2. The protagonist pretends that his level is too low and is easily ignored by others, which can easily cause trouble. 3. The protagonist is obviously not high in level but still likes to show off and slap people in the face. 4 Every senior sister can listen to his heart
Well written, don't write it next time
What are you writing about? You can even it out yourself.
After nine lives, you still need to listen to others. You were knocked unconscious and taken away. How did you live before? It was like this at the beginning. It is hard to imagine that this is a person who has lived for nine lives. He was extremely poisonous from the beginning.
This author, I want to tell you something. If you look at this book from an outsider's perspective, what type do you think this book is? Of course, this book is in the mind-reading genre. Here you have to think about it, in which direction does our enthusiasm and reason for reading this book develop? Of course, I read this book to see the empress see through other people's minds and hear other people's voices. However, the content you wrote about these plots is really very little. This is the crux of the problem. You should write more about what you think in your heart and be heard by others, so that you can retain readers. I read this book It's just to see what kind of expressions other people are thinking about. The content you wrote is too far away. You wrote too little content about being read by others. If you are still interested in developing in the direction of mind reading, I suggest you write another book. I suggest you write more chapters about the type of things that others can't read.
This writing is so peaceful. There seems to be no ruthless people.
What the hell are you writing about? It's okay at the beginning.
Coming
"The Gods Come, I Created the Myths of the Heavens" came to visit and collected it. I hope to pay you a return visit.