Showbiz: I Asked You to Sell Products, Not Turn Them into Songs

It's too shabby. I keep bragging, copying the content, and just making up the numbers and the number of lines in each chapter. My eyes keep rolling down when I read it. It's uncomfortable.

It's too boring, I'm trying to repeat myself; I just wrote the lyrics several times with all my heart, and there are all kinds of repetitions; I gave up; it's too embarrassing

I have only read more than 10 chapters. I personally think that the idea is actually quite good, but the development of the plot, or the author's skill, is really not that interesting. To sum up, I feel that it is just 4 words, which is too much. It feels like polishing this idea carefully. I should be able to write a very good novel. But this book is really hard to describe.

I keep repeating hydrology, short and weak

Water, too watery, water from the four oceans, Gaga brought goods without mentioning any money, and the copyright of the songs he sang was not registered.

It's all description. . Too many words

I want to say how much does the anchor pay for bringing goods? If you don't pay for bringing the goods, it's all for nothing?

Faint to death, this is the end. The author is so irresponsible

Why did the situation end like this?

I feel like what I'm reading is not a novel, but an outline.