Game Design: Starting Minecraft

The author was too out of touch with the plot here, jumping away before it even started, and there was too much nonsense. Negative comments, you can read it yourself.

It feels great, but the pace is so slow. It only took 3 days to write more than 80 chapters. I know this part is the whole plot, but there is no need to be so procrastinating.

I finished the first few chapters of Minecraft in the beginning. When Red Alert participated in the competition, I just wrote more than 40 chapters. Difficult to collapse

Negative review, when the main character written by the author was at the exhibition for the first time, the school beauty was supposed to go to the offline meeting, but halfway, the campus beauty grandma got seriously ill? Author, it is boring and boring to do this, because your routine is too samey, please change it to something fresh, bad review, bye bye! I don't like people who dig holes in novels, don't like foreshadowing, and don't like people who hide their family members. .

It's not good-looking. There's very little about the game in the whole story. It's all about how popular and capable the male protagonist is, and how he slaps cannon fodder in the face. I guess the rating is bad.

But it sucked, otherwise it would have been great. It seems like this type of novel can't make it to the end with a satisfying ending.

After watching the first game on campus, I noticed this outrageous progress bar and had a bad feeling that it would be over after only four games at the provincial level. The system has released two tasks, and the game data has disappeared. The sense of existence is very low. You can just delete the system if you give the male protagonist a photographic memory. I won't talk about the rest. If you are still interested after reading what I said, just click in and read it.

If you don't have a system, you still need people to make games. If you have a system, you still need people to make games. So what's the use of this system?

Not bad, just too little.

Wow, you are such a great author. Forget about typos. After all, for the sake of typing speed, I can understand some typos. But your novel has more than 300 chapters in total. When it reaches more than 100 chapters, you can even write the protagonist's name wrong? Did you copy what was written by AI? Change your name? Or just copy it directly? Or is it that you opened 3 or 5 books in a row and mistook the protagonist? What about the outline? For a novel with more than 300 chapters, I don't ask you to give a detailed outline, but can you at least list the names and relationships of the characters?