[Food article + love article + single female protagonist]
This book is also called:
"I thought it was love at first sight, but it turned out to be childhood sweethearts"
"Dad is the richest man, and I didn't know it until I was twenty years old"
His parents left home to travel, and Lin Lan ran a noodle shop by himself.
Fortunately, the God of Cooking system appeared on him.
The hand-made noodles instantly conquered the taste buds of popular internet celebrity Niu Xiaodao.
However, Niu Xiaodao visited the store and asked for money by force.
Su Mucheng, the eldest daughter of the Su family, accidentally passed by the noodle shop and exposed Niu Xiaodao's shameless behavior and promoted Lin Lan's cooking skills.
From then on, Lin Lan quickly became popular. Under Su Mucheng's management, his status continued to rise. From an ordinary boy, he first became the Green Vine Food Promotion Ambassador, and then became a well-known gourmet master at home and abroad.
Su Mucheng, who had a habit of outdoor live broadcasting, also transformed into a food anchor during her relationship with Lin Lan. What she broadcast every day was not food, but her teasing Lin Lan and spreading dog food.
Audiences lamented that the food live broadcast can actually make people full!
Dear friend, happy Mid-Autumn Festival. I have collected the masterpieces. I hope you can recycle them and support each other. Thank you. Let's work hard together.
Explanatory post
There are three chapters and 6,000 words per day. Please add it to your collection.
(Big brother will give you a reward, please try to add more updates as much as possible)
I am new to Zongheng, I hope you can get support, thank you all~~
ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ
The writing was good at the beginning, and the characters were very full of flesh and blood, but in the later stages, the plot skipped a bit too fast and couldn't keep up with the rhythm at all. The final ending was also very hasty.
There are too many punctuation marks, and even if you try to make up the word count, you won't be able to include such punctuation marks.
There are too many commas. When I read the book, I would read it silently in my mind. I felt like I was almost stuttering.
Who is the boy and who is the girl? You wrote the male as female, what the hell did you write?
I was watching it well, but suddenly I got a social phobia for the restaurant owner, and I couldn't watch it anymore.
During the ward rounds, I saw that you, writer, have too many commas. I suggest you delete some commas. Otherwise, if you talk incessantly, you will feel like your words are sticking out, which is not very beautiful.
Qiqi is here, good Thursday night ""
Dear friend, happy Mid-Autumn Festival. I have collected the masterpieces. I hope you can recycle them and support each other. Thank you. Let's work hard together.
Explanatory post
There are three chapters and 6,000 words per day. Please add it to your collection. (Big brother will give you a reward, please try to add more updates as much as possible) I am new to Zongheng, I hope you can get support, thank you all~~ ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ
The writing was good at the beginning, and the characters were very full of flesh and blood, but in the later stages, the plot skipped a bit too fast and couldn't keep up with the rhythm at all. The final ending was also very hasty.
There are too many punctuation marks, and even if you try to make up the word count, you won't be able to include such punctuation marks.
There are too many commas. When I read the book, I would read it silently in my mind. I felt like I was almost stuttering.
Who is the boy and who is the girl? You wrote the male as female, what the hell did you write?
I was watching it well, but suddenly I got a social phobia for the restaurant owner, and I couldn't watch it anymore.
During the ward rounds, I saw that you, writer, have too many commas. I suggest you delete some commas. Otherwise, if you talk incessantly, you will feel like your words are sticking out, which is not very beautiful.
Can't you just leave the commas?