Ming Dynasty: Zhu Yuanzhang Simulated the National Destiny at the Beginning

Time traveler is awesome (broken voice) Come on, the writing is very interesting. I like each other and recommend each other, boss.

Damn it, isn't Cao Zhi on the cover?

In the thirteenth year of Hongwu's reign, Zhu Xiongying was only 5 years old. Wasn't your Y born?

I just want to ask, why did it disappear inexplicably?

It's so disgusting. You're so awesome. You can't redeem yourself for Ling'er and let her live a normal life. Don't talk about helping all the people who are suffering. This is destined to help. Even if you have the ability to help, you don't help. You still say that you are a friend. What? Helping you is out of love and not out of duty. It's disgusting.

The subject matter is very good, but the author wrote it crookedly. The setting is so-so. I wrote about policies, state affairs, and group chat in the early stage. I don't see the use of it. The main character is the group leader, Zhu Yuanzhang is the group member, and martial arts and internal strength are added in the middle. It's not my cup of tea. The character setting is average, not confusing or lacking in personality. There is no main plot line. I thought it would start from the group chat. The emperors from various dynasties would come together to conquer the world or rush to modernization. Suddenly martial arts and internal strength were added, and it became a fantasy. I couldn't believe it. I'll take a look again. If the writing settings are rounded, then it's still readable. I'll change it again. If it doesn't work, it'll be poisoned.

It's great to keep writing honestly. The subject matter is still fresh. The setting adds too much chaos, which makes the title of your simulator stand out. It mainly writes about the interaction between the protagonist and Zhu Yuanzhang, plus the simulation of the simulator, and adds new functions. Not only does the protagonist become stronger, but Zhu Yuanzhang can also benefit? In addition, there is a group, and you can also write about the interaction between emperors of other dynasties in the parallel world and Zhu Yuanzhang, but add some fantasy, stealing the chicken but losing the rice. If you want to laugh, everything is modern, and you have to add martial arts settings by yourself to see how you manage the world.

In terms of settings, it's a mess. The first is that Zhu Yuanzhang's receptive ability is too strong? And all modern words, can he understand them? Modern words are all new creations, either words are similar to objects, or new words are introduced from abroad, such as sofa The second is that there are inexplicably more people and internal forces. From the beginning, I thought I was writing about national affairs to developing and conquering other countries. There is no need to write about family and state affairs if one's personal strength is strong. Look at the Avengers. If one's personal strength is strong, it is a novel about heroic deeds. It is easy to collapse after writing. How do you plan to complete it? Is the secret book an undisclosed secret? The aristocratic family can't get it either? If there are factions, how can there be no clans? Do the bandits who dominate the mountain have to develop internal skills? Why not use it if there is a personal gain? Written like this, if the literary school has Confucianism, then doesn't the martial arts school have to have Shaolin, Wudang, and Emei? The reason why military attachés cannot fight against the literary sect is because there is no corresponding culture and inheritance, and it is impossible to stay in troubled times, so they will decline. Civilian officials have a constant stream of talents entering the court every year, and they will be absorbed by various factions, so they can continue to exist. Therefore, it cannot be perfected in the later stage, and the settings will definitely fail. Don't talk about parallel worlds. With a system, everything is possible. You wrote so many chapters based on the history of the Ming Dynasty the year before last, so you want to break the foundation? If you insist on writing, you have to explain the previous dynasties, why martial arts did not appear, why did the dynasties fall, and why the army did not use martial arts, including the emperor's private soldiers, and the major families wanted to combine with you, the eunuch of the previous dynasty in the ruined palace who had martial arts and became a eunuch.

It's really well written. The writing is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. .

People who are not time travelers get golden fingers, and their receptive ability is really strong.