Asking the Immortal Road

I came back to take a look and found out that the author has a new work. I am very looking forward to reading it. I really like the author's writing style.

The heroine has no charisma and is very passive and coy when meeting the hero. The hero is also disgusting and takes advantage of her at every turn. His kindness to the heroine is also shown in terms of money. A 15-year old bookworm has identified it as a waste of time.

This book is too long. From a structural point of view, the author's structure is very large, but there are too many trivial branch plots that have little relationship with the main line. There will be big gaps between the key plots that are really related to the main line, so it is difficult to keep people excited about reading the book. Even because the gaps are too long, the author has forgotten the previous settings, resulting in inconsistencies. The logic setting of cultivating immortals is also slightly lacking. In short, dual cultivation is a golden finger. Whenever you need to improve, you can just take it out and take care of it. The description of psychological activities is too delicate, and sometimes it is mentioned repeatedly, wasting a lot of space to describe the relationship between the male and female protagonists. The reason why I gave it a good review was because the system prompted a review in the first hundred chapters. At that time, I felt pretty good. The actual evaluation is about mediocre. It takes a lot of patience to read it.

In the early stage, the heroine was very weak and frustrated, but in the later stage...

It feels like a good book that has been buried

The more I look at it, the better it looks. The author is really imaginative.

A great book, underrated and deserves a 9.9 Rating. Different from ordinary immortal cultivation upgrades At the beginning of the story, you are cultivating immortality, working, and going to college, which is a bit difficult to get into. The following content becomes more and more intoxicating A majestic and unique work

When I read this book, I felt very confused. One moment, it was modern, and the other moment, it was about cultivating immortals. The house in the future + the clothes of ancient people + the cultivation techniques of cultivating immortals

The will to fight tenaciously and refuse to admit defeat.

The heroine is just a fool. She doesn't even open her mouth and doesn't know how to fight back. It's so frustrating to watch.