After Transforming into Bai Yueguang, He Defeated the Villain

It's really great, but the ending of the modern chapter is a bit lacking.

Really, it gets more touching as you go to the end, but the ending is still pretty good. It's a pity that it would be great if the author could write about Jian and Sang Wanyue meeting each other again.

It's funny and inspirational. It also has chicken soup for the soul from time to time. It's very good.

I feel that the emotional line of this book is very confusing, and there are only one original work plus so many copies. It really makes it really messy. When I first started watching it, I thought it was pretty good. But as I watched it, it became more and more confusing and I couldn't stand it anymore.

It's a bit hard to watch, and I don't have any particular desire to continue watching it.

I have read more than 110 chapters, and now I feel that the plot is quite confusing and I can't understand it.

Is this a heroine story? The heroine's aura as the protagonist is too strong. The male protagonist's number of productions is equal to that of other supporting characters.

To be honest, the emotional line is not connected. To put it bluntly, the whole process is to torture the female protagonist and kill a bunch of people. The male protagonist is always an afterthought. I don't quite understand what the heroine's character is. The plot is very inconsistent.

I finished reading 300 chapters in one day. Generally speaking, I felt that the relationship between the heroine and the hero was a bit inexplicable in the first part, and then I found out that it was caused by the past life, and then all the pitfalls were filled. The whole story is very three-dimensional, the timeline is very clear, the relationship between the characters is relatively clear, and the pattern is also laid out. The writing style is also very good, and the heroine's outlook on life is relatively positive. In fact, there are not too many inexplicable emotional scenes between the heroine and the hero, but more often the heroine's fight against monsters, rebirth and upgrades. I think this is very good, because although there are not many emotional scenes, the relationship between the two people can be seen to be accumulated bit by bit. It is deep enough and not inexplicable.

The writing style can be said to be very immature. If you come to read it, you have to face confusing places. I like cool writing but don't like brainless ones. It's too immature. Even Qu Yang said it is very powerful. It's almost gone and he talks nonsense. All the characters are focused on the protagonist. The logic of the whole book is not mentioned. The character's personality is only highlighted in a few points: yandere, handsome, and pitiful. , And it doesn't feel that refreshing and drags on. In fact, it is enough to write directly from the first point of view of the protagonist, with more foreshadowing. The actual text is very confusing, and I feel that the character is still not well-shaped. The male and female actors have experienced so much, how can they not be ruthless in their actions? Why do the supporting characters only talk so much? The heroine's fight scene is also a masterpiece. The author's writing is not very good. I suggest you practice more and shape the characters well. I feel that the emotions and behavior of the characters are very chaotic. I won't say it is strange. Otherwise, some people will blame the yandere for lack of love. In the comment area, when the female protagonist and the male protagonist cooperated to fight Qiu and Cui, some people asked why the relationship was like this, and then some people said that it was because of the male protagonist. Yandere, I can only say that this kind of writing can only be read without thinking. I have endured it a few times but it still bothers me. This may be because the rating is not high. I just want to mention that the author can still practice. If anyone can take it, please tell me and don't take a few strokes and put a label on it. After all, the heroine is an adult, but the character is immature.