Swallows Return to Their Nests

The plot is wonderful and the writing is brilliant. I give you thumbs up.

It looks good, but the author made too many typos

It's so good, I was attracted to it in the first chapter. Even the paragraphs that have no word count are quite exciting. The plot is compact. I want to see it made into a TV series, but who can play Xu Qingmo well?

The plot is compact and the characters are fleshed out and full of flesh and blood. The emotional development rhythm of the male and female protagonists is also just right, and the house fighting and power plot parts are also just right without being verbose. There are just too many typos, and there are many places where most of the sentences are swallowed up, resulting in some plots not being connected. Overall, it is quite good-looking. If the author can proofread it carefully, I believe it will attract more people and the rating will be higher.

It's not that sadistic, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, it's pretty good

I read Chun Yan Ferry first and saw some readers commented that this book is about the parents of the heroine's grandmother in Chun Yan Ferry (it should be this relationship. I remember that the heroine's grandmother was also good friends with Huide, but it was actually her mother who was good friends with Huide), so the heroine's great-grandmother is Xu Qingmo. Oops, I don't care. I can't figure it out. This book is also good to read, but there are not many sweet places. It is indeed a book about national justice. Xu Qingmo is so tired that I don't know what to say. Just pretty

The plot is exciting and the sentences are witty and humorous. The only drawback is that it drags a little after half way through.

The only thing that wasn't very good was the part where the heroine died but then came back to life. It made me cry. I didn't like it. Everything else was good.

I saw in Chapter 397 that the author wrote about the heroine going to save people and lightly lifting a 170-pound mace with one hand in front of He Wenlin. He Wenlin couldn't lift it, but she, a weak woman two heads shorter than the man, could pick it up. It was really funny. From this point on, I gave up on the article. The writing was very rubbish, rubbish, and a waste of the time I spent earlier.

Is it possible... Not possible? This is a bad sentence that is used very frequently. Please change it as soon as possible.