In her previous life, she refused to settle for an ordinary existence, defied her father's wishes, abandoned her betrothal, and eloped with the man she loved. She thought they would live happily ever after, with plenty to eat and warm clothes to wear. Little did she know that within two years, the world would descend into chaos, and that man would sell her to bandits for a meal.
Reborn, she only wants to spend her life tucked away in the mountains. She rolls up her sleeves and punches the rival trying to seduce her man, then takes on her mother-in-law, who can't stand to see her happy. But what's with this man who hands her a stick when she fights, and serves her tea while she argues with his mother? Is he trying to make things worse on purpose?
The heroine was a prostitute in a bandit's den in her previous life. No wonder she is so open-minded.
It's very messy, the writing is not good, and the wording is terrible.
Oh my god. . Help, the male protagonist slept with several women while they were engaged. He didn't know that the female protagonist's identity had overpowered the female protagonist, but the female protagonist actually thought that the male protagonist was a responsible person. What are these three views??!!???? Author, are you okay?
There are a lot of typos in the article, and there is no distinction between them.
I am not very good at sentence segmentation. Many times there is not a single punctuation mark in a long paragraph.
It felt good at first, but then the mother-in-law's temperament changed drastically when she appeared in the middle. It was hard for me to accept it. I spent so much time writing about the grain harvesting, but it ended with all the people around me entering the other world. Are you planning to let them out? Just like the last sentence, this is just the beginning, but the plot ended abruptly just as it started? Are you kidding me?
Most of the article is about how to collect grain, just to survive in troubled times until the end of troubled times. But is it realistic to collect grain for ten years? Can I still eat ten years of old grain? Besides, they only want people from their own village to take refuge in that huge valley that can accommodate 20,000 people. Why can't such good land be reserved for farming and breeding? As long as water is brought in for irrigation, it is enough. There is no shortage of water in the cave. Therefore, those who do not prioritize saving seeds but prioritize saving food are also great people! So can vegetables, fruits and meat be stored for more than ten or twenty years without going bad? Or are they not eating meat and vegetables during their time away from the world? As a result, writing so much about grain harvesting ended with all the people from surrounding towns entering the valley? Are you kidding me? Do the heroine of Feng Ming and Guoer have no chance to leave the valley again? Where is my younger brother's official position? Where is Dadi's military general? Did the author eat them all? Everything is fine up front, but in the middle, a girl who is five years older has to play house with a kid. Why do I not believe it? Whose little boy likes to play with a big girl who is quick to discuss marriage? Or play house which girls like? People obviously like to go up to the mountains to hunt birds, dig out their nests, and go down to the river to touch fish, pee on their butts, and play in the mud. Who would want to play house with a big girl? This big girl still has a secret crush on this little kid? His mother actually doesn't mind that her age is the most attractive to this elderly widow? I really have so many things to talk about!
I really don't like this way of writing. Almost everything that is hidden needs to be figured out by the reader. He or she will always whisper something to keep the reader from knowing, and they won't clearly explain what they discussed later. Many things are used as hidden clues to make people guess, but in the end you won't know whether your guess is correct or not, because no one will give you the correct answer. Is this a matter of killing and not burying? Who set the foreshadowing like this? There are at least a dozen places like this without any explanation, which makes people really angry. If you don't want to write a follow-up, then don't make so many mysterious points for people to guess. It's really annoying!
Don't look, it ends halfway, there's no tail
This book was wonderfully written, but the ending was sloppy. It ended when I saw how wonderful it was, and I felt like I had lost half of it, which was a bit regretful.