Everywhere I Look Is You

I think there are some contradictions in this book. Of course, it's not bad, but I personally think there are some logical inconsistencies. When Ou Xiaoxiao told Li Yu that she was a substitute for the person he liked, Li Yu did not refute or respond. I think this is not a sign of loving someone. Later, Li Yu's confession to her at the Paris Manor also made me a little confused, because before that, he did not express it. Either they don't communicate, don't explain, are evaded, or they suddenly express their feelings and express their feelings. In short, it makes me feel a little out of my mind. At least I have laid a foreshadowing before this. The male protagonist's grandmother's mission is not very clear. She only said that she has an illegitimate daughter (forget the name for now), and did not say how she met her grandfather later, and what happened with the illegitimate daughter's biological father. Yu Ming's family did not explain how the head of the family and the illegitimate daughter met and got married. You don't have to go into details, but you have to sort it out. Well, it's a bit confusing, and they can clearly explain the middle part of the communication, but they blocked it for some reasons. I can understand this, but too many times, it seems a bit evasive. Furthermore, the character of Yi Ling in the article is different from the character of the old tailor and Paris. There are some differences, it will be a bit off-putting, it gives me the feeling that the person in front is a person, and the person behind is another person, a bit..., Let's end... Even if Li Yu can't accept himself like that, there is no need not to tell his family, but he didn't go into details about how his eyes were hurt, and how he was rescued underwater. He loves the heroine as much as he can, so why can he bear to watch her make people cry? And the reason why he won't go is a bit abrupt. At least, he should let her know that he is fine! Uh... Okay, maybe I have a lot of questions, but this is not a negative review, just my personal doubts. The writing of this book is still very good. I hope the author will write better and better (✪▽✪)

The author would like to thank you for updating.

Dear book friends. This is my first book in my book writing career. I have to say that I have a lot of room for improvement, and I hope everyone will bear with me. Many times, I myself can't see the problem. Your comments are the direction for my progress. Thank you!

I feel like the author's writing is getting better and better, ah~ I like it. I can understand whatever the plot is, but I just hope that the author will not ruin the characters of the male and female protagonists in the future. Of course, the male and female protagonists are still very good so far, and the plot is also exciting and not boring. It is very addictive and enjoyable to watch. There is a wide range of update speeds that I can accept. I think the author's update speed is still acceptable. I'm looking forward to the following chapters. It doesn't matter if it's slow, I can go back and read it. This book is very good, I recommend everyone to read it! !

Today, write something to yourself. I have always thought that I did not have the ability to write a book, but I persisted unknowingly. Although this book is not so ideal, it is as precious as my first child. Thanks to this book, it gave me the opportunity to constantly recognize my own shortcomings. I believe it will get better and better!

Wow, it looks great, but some parts are too decorated. But I love the plot and never tire of watching it. I like the kind of jealousy that doesn't affect feelings, preferably a cute one\(//∇//)\. Suddenly I understand the feelings of readers who urge the author to update. The heroine is smart and real, and the inner dramas of the male and female protagonists sometimes feel so cute, and neither male nor female protagonist is weak. I still like the setting of the male and female protagonists in this book, and the author's writing is also more detailed. There is nothing that makes me confused so far. Meng guessed that the male protagonist had a crush on the female protagonist before. This... This has been planned for a long time. I hope the author will make this book better and better (I want to be the first reviewer)

Dear author, I'm here to urge you to update.

I will never tire of reading this kind of book, so please give it a thumbs up! Waiting for updates…

I have never read a novel before, but after reading this one, I became interested. Come on, author n

I hope the author can fill in the holes 1. The endings of Yang Yi, Yi Ling and Lisa 2. The truth about Xiaoxiao's affair with the male protagonist 3. What happened to my aunt?