Number One Under Heaven

The first part was pretty good, light and humorous, but there were a lot of pitfalls that I didn't know how to fill in. The last part may have been too popular and I didn't want to write it anymore, so I ended it hastily. Overall, it was okay, and the writing was good. I hope the author doesn't write so long next time and can compress the plot a little more.

What a mess. It was written by the third grade of elementary school. It's the most rubbish.

Messy logic, confusing thinking!!!

It ended like this, it was so nonsense. Speechless

Nowadays, books are good at the beginning, but get worse as they go on. I usually change them after reading about halfway through.

The back doesn't look good, it's too wordy

What are you doing when you write so slowly?

It's been over a thousand chapters, and I haven't managed to get even one of my nine fiancées.

Either don't update, or the update is a bunch of nonsense.

It's a waste of words, there are too many typos, it's too bad and boring.