Number One in the World

The first part was pretty good, light and humorous, but there were a lot of pitfalls that I didn't know how to fill in. The last part may have been too popular and I didn't want to write it anymore, so I ended it hastily. Overall, it was okay, and the writing was good. I hope the author doesn't write so long next time and can compress the plot a little more.

What a mess. It was written by the third grade of elementary school. It's the most rubbish.

Messy logic, confusing thinking! ! !

It ended like this, it was so nonsense. Speechless

Nowadays, books are good at the beginning, but get worse as they go on. I usually change them after reading about halfway through.

The back doesn't look good, it's too wordy

What are you doing when you write so slowly?

It's been over a thousand chapters, and I haven't managed to get even one of my nine fiancées.

Either don't update, or the update is a bunch of nonsense.

It's a waste of words, there are too many typos, it's too bad and boring.