Mr. He, Your Wife Is Back to Borrow Your Luck

It's just that the heroine's enlightenment came too late, and there was too little sweet love.

. . I was really tired after watching the end, there were so few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists

It doesn't look good! Let me start by saying that after reading the front part, I thought it was okay, but after seeing the back part, I really felt that it was ridiculous. I had the chance to slap the enemy in the face, but I was still thinking about whether to do it. It was procrastinating, and the male protagonist made misunderstandings and refused to talk about it. I feel that those who gave good reviews probably gave it good reviews after seeing a hundred chapters that automatically popped up. I don't know how to delete the original good reviews. I just want to say that it is not good. I even don't understand why there is a 9.8 Rating. This is so different from the last book I read, The First Eye Magician.

I think the title of this book should be Me and My Seven Masters. The whole text about the male protagonist and the female protagonist is probably not as long as one of the masters~ Sigh~

2024.10.9 14:54 Completed check-in✔️

The plot is too difficult, too wordy, and the text is abandoned.

The female protagonist is short of money and life, doing good deeds will increase her merits, getting close to the male protagonist will increase her merits, and increasing the daily spending limit is quite novel. The subsequent plots are a bit cliche. Maybe the plots are very different and not attractive anymore.

The more you look at it, the less interesting it becomes.

After the second swipe, I still can't see it. After a cursory look, it still doesn't catch my eye.

How can I put it, the previous plot is quite good, but the emotional line is very slow and ink-drawn. In the later stage, the emotional line is promoted quickly, and the ending is a bit limited and a bit fast. It gives people the feeling that there is a lot of ink in the front, and I want to end the article quickly later. There should be some things that need to be written later, such as the two protagonists, how do they live a sweet life, right? None of this talks about the process of falling in love, nor does it say much about it. It's all written in one stroke.