Every One of My Disciples Shocks the Immortal Realm

Personally, I think it's okay, but the later part of resurrecting Haochuan is a bit too easy, and the ending is a bit rushed. Overall I quite like it, there are relatively few typos.

Well written! ! ! I've already thought about the next book for you. Let's just write about the Demon King. After all, it's my opinion that the senior brother is not allowed.

It doesn't look good, it's boring. Personal review, it doesn't look good.

I've seen it, my disciples are all shocked in the fairy world

Originally, I went there for the introduction to the history of master and apprentice cultivating immortality, to see how they shocked the immortal world. As a result, the whole book is about men. I remembered to accept the disciples at the beginning. Not to mention shocking the fairy world at the end, three of the four disciples were missing. I don't know what happened to those three. Just call it The Love History of My Man and Me.

Other books were boring after reading more than 200 chapters, and I started to talk nonsense, but I read this one without realizing it. The first half looks better, the second half is a bit worse, but overall it's okay!

I have read more than 240 chapters. I gave up once before and went back to read it again. The heroine is really, really, really a bit outrageous. Not to mention the previous apprenticeships, she is the eldest lady on the island. She has read poetry and books and knows a lot. So I accept it, but is Phoenix a Chinese cabbage? Got it casually? There were so many shortcomings in the front that we can ignore them. Just what happened in the upper realm later. She was so weak in the lower realm, but when she reached the upper realm, she was stronger than Baili Wujiang? She is instantly invincible. It is so difficult for others to improve due to their orthodoxy. How can she be invincible without any real setbacks like drinking water? Casually crushing the masters of the upper world? The relationship between the male and female protagonists is even more outrageous. How come they fell in love, and started falling in love as soon as they confirmed that they liked each other. They didn't even express their affection for each other, and went to bed directly later. Don't mention this. After all, most male and female protagonists are like this. What about the end? When encountering the so-called sword god, the male protagonist can't beat him and has to run away. Forget it, the clone can barely understand it, but when she meets her apprentice, she leaves him alone? A male protagonist who knows clearly that he can't beat him, and who clearly knows that he can't beat him, but still chooses to bring his clone to pieces? In the end, it was long enough for us to leave together. Shang Da cleverly was a big wretch and deserved to be left to die, right... There were only more than 300 chapters, so I thought I would just endure it and finish reading it, but the moment I saw the brainless heroine abandoning her apprentice, I couldn't stand it anymore. I didn't understand why the score was so high.

The heroine: Wei Ranxue, cheerful, outspoken, no virgin, decisive in killing. The hero: Baili Kong in the early stage, Haochuan Immortal. I personally don't like his character very much. He is a bit rebellious and jealous. The plot is coherent and compact, and the writing is very good. I recommend this book to newcomers! !

I've read more than forty chapters and skipped to the end. It's very well written, but I feel like it's a bit stained and I don't want to read it!

How innocent is my father? I was forced to do so. Baili drove him crazy, crazy, crazy.