Xuanshui Sect, which cannot eat more scallions, is too poor, so it has to sell talented disciples to the sect, not only for the sake of the disciples, but also for the survival of Xuanshui Sect.
The second senior brother, Wu Xu, is thoughtful and cautious. However, why should Xuan Shui Sect's naive and impulsive junior brother refuse to switch to the big sect and continue to be the leader of Xuan Shui Sect! The result was trouble after trouble. The two brothers fought for the survival of Xuanshui Sect in a dangerous world and under conspiracies!
After fighting and fighting, that small sect Xuan Shui Sect was able to rule the world and look down upon all the heroes!
It's just... Still poor!
Haha, you are awesome, the life of a cultivator is worse than that of a farmer, haha, what kind of mess is this? Didn't you go to kindergarten?
They are all very good, especially the protagonist who is flesh and blood and has a very positive outlook. However, the plot is too tight, one incident follows another, and I feel exhausted after watching it for a long time.
The woman's face was covered with a veil, her face could not be seen clearly, and her expression was stern! Does this make sense?
Why is it so long-winded at the end of writing? Too wordy. Long-winded, unbearable long-winded. Long-winded
As you can imagine, the character names are chosen randomly.
There are a lot of poisonous points, many typos, and the writing style is like that of a primary school student who has not graduated.
I don't quite understand, I really don't understand, how can a person who is such a holy mother and cares about everything cultivate immortality?
Well, maybe the author wants to create a story where the protagonists are bound to each other and passionate, but unfortunately, what I see more is that the protagonists are stupid, brainless and weak. When they should be hard, they become soft and become a ball of mud. I didn't want to improve my strength, but at the moment of life and death, I sacrificed the people I care about. It failed as a passionate comedy, and it failed even more as a growth story. I didn't see the comedy, the passion, and I couldn't see the growth. The story was good and the setting was good, which can be used as bonus points. But it's a pity that the protagonists were written in a mess and the whole story collapsed. I couldn't see it, so I can only give negative points. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the next part.
The writing is too poisonous. I can't stand the free ones.
It feels like the people watching are feeling aggrieved. Those who are cultivating immortals are not as miserable as not practicing martial arts, right? Can't they just go out and pick up some jobs and make money?
Haha, you are awesome, the life of a cultivator is worse than that of a farmer, haha, what kind of mess is this? Didn't you go to kindergarten?
They are all very good, especially the protagonist who is flesh and blood and has a very positive outlook. However, the plot is too tight, one incident follows another, and I feel exhausted after watching it for a long time.
The woman's face was covered with a veil, her face could not be seen clearly, and her expression was stern! Does this make sense?
Why is it so long-winded at the end of writing? Too wordy. Long-winded, unbearable long-winded. Long-winded
As you can imagine, the character names are chosen randomly.
There are a lot of poisonous points, many typos, and the writing style is like that of a primary school student who has not graduated.
I don't quite understand, I really don't understand, how can a person who is such a holy mother and cares about everything cultivate immortality?
Well, maybe the author wants to create a story where the protagonists are bound to each other and passionate, but unfortunately, what I see more is that the protagonists are stupid, brainless and weak. When they should be hard, they become soft and become a ball of mud. I didn't want to improve my strength, but at the moment of life and death, I sacrificed the people I care about. It failed as a passionate comedy, and it failed even more as a growth story. I didn't see the comedy, the passion, and I couldn't see the growth. The story was good and the setting was good, which can be used as bonus points. But it's a pity that the protagonists were written in a mess and the whole story collapsed. I couldn't see it, so I can only give negative points. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the next part.
The writing is too poisonous. I can't stand the free ones.
It feels like the people watching are feeling aggrieved. Those who are cultivating immortals are not as miserable as not practicing martial arts, right? Can't they just go out and pick up some jobs and make money?