Wan Gu Poison Lord

There are too many typos, even the chapter titles have typos, and they are also too wordy.

The man didn't take the initiative and just laughed, smiled slightly, and laughed. He was just crazy.

There are big problems with this book. First of all, the ending is too sloppy and a lot of the content is passed over in one stroke. Secondly, the protagonist doesn't even arrive at the Alchemy Saint.

Maybe it doesn't suit my taste. I feel like the technique is a bit too raw, or it's the technique of a long time ago novel, or maybe I've read it a lot and feel it's a bit the same. Write with the crowd.

The protagonist's father is going to kill him. Why should he take his father's surname instead of giving her mother's surname?

Let me explain to you that the protagonist of this book is originally between good and evil, so his behavior style is completely different from that of the Holy Mother. A person who practices poison tends to be darker in many aspects.

After reading your Journey to the West, I immediately finished reading this one. Pretty good.

This ending is a bit unsatisfactory. I always feel like the ending is too hasty.

In one chapter, the male protagonist says that women have poor adaptability. You can change it to: You really have poor adaptability. This should make people think that you are saying that women have poor adaptability. . Not all women are like this. . Also, the male protagonist said that Li Lan has double standards, doesn't the male protagonist not have double standards? If he was tortured by that woman, would he let her go? If the male protagonist really has such a good heart, why does he want to take revenge on the Jie family? This makes me a bit uncomfortable as a woman. .

Brother, of course you have to take advantage of the situation when you have no ability.