The Male Protagonist of "Quick Travel" Is Not Good This Time

It's very weird, a lot of logic is illogical, and as a fast traveler, it is too weak, and there is no appearance that is consistent with a fast traveler.

Urging for more, urging for more, not enough

I think the author should develop the character of the heroine. If she is not decisive, she will be hurt every time. She also has the heart of the Holy Mother. She should be given a decisive character. There is no need to be a bad man or woman if you want merit. Creating value is also merit. You can write the heroine into a killer and train her since she was a child. Her character looks useless.

I just read the first chapter and I feel it is very interesting. I am also looking forward to the following content. I hope the author will update another chapter when he has time and a good mood someday. Looking forward to it~

It's easy for the male protagonist and his male counterpart to fall in love with the female protagonist The content is also the same, everything that follows is explained at the beginning, and there is no twist at the end, it is just plain, like one thing is told over and over again. It's also a little bit puzzling. Wherever they go, the male and female protagonists seem to teleport wherever they meet.

The plot is cliche and the plot is stiff

It's really good-looking, and there's no problem with your thinking and logic ٩(๑•ㅂ•)۶ I just hope it won't be s-y in the end. I cried when I read the first story (๑ १д१)

It's very interesting. Friends who like to read about fast time travel can get involved. This book is really good.

The heroine in the first article is a bit green. I seem to have seen the same old routine in TV series. I don't like it very much. There may be surprises later, so I'll watch it again.

Author, I hope you don't give up, come on