Legend of Heroes of China

The author is great. The protagonist should be more focused on relationships and not have three wives and four concubines.

It would be better if the fighting is more exciting, praise!

I am sincerely grateful to the one or two book friends who have been reminding Momo of updates. Let me know that my book is actually being read. Touched, touched (ಥ_ಥ)

It's okay to write, but the protagonist was struck thousands of times by Gui Yuanjing's lightning at the beginning, but he didn't die? I've only read a few chapters, but I don't know if Guiyuan Jing is powerful?

I hope the author can add a little more mystery. Don't always see the ending from the beginning. If it's too popular, no one will like it.

Why is the realm so complicated? What about the original realm?

I've been really busy lately. Leave home at eight o'clock and arrive home at twelve o'clock. Open all month long. It may not be updated properly before the end of the month. I feel sorry for everyone ಥ_ಥ

After reading Chapter 10, it is clear at a glance that the opening plot is Tudou's break-up of the engagement. The details are handled well, but if the subsequent plot is too bland, it will be abandoned. Or as the saying goes, recognize books but not people. Good reading is the most basic requirement for writing a book, but it should not deviate from the topic. At least it should make people want to read on, right?

Linger sheds too many tears, and the snake annoys me even more.

This is my first time writing a novel. It's a completely different mood than reading a novel. I just hope that I can write the complete story I want. I hope I can write more decently as time goes by.