The First Development of the Misfortune Princess

Who is the male protagonist? What is the relationship between Uncle Nine Emperors and the male protagonist?

The ending was written too hastily, anticlimactic. It was well written before.

It ended in a hurry, a bit anticlimactic

I must narcissistically recommend my own novels

It's a bit messy, I want to give up just looking at it

Haha, I finally understand. The two authors are friends, let's work together. Haha, it's so cute. Although I haven't read it, I would like to give you some advice. Put yourself in the role and think about the character's thoughts and next actions. You will have a more complete outline of the character, and you can also find out what is wrong, haha. This is my own suggestion. Although I don't write novels, I personally think it will be helpful if I read novels in this way.

Who is the hero! , I can't understand the relationship a bit, but it's still good

Where was the antidote found? The guy from Liuli Island didn't know who killed his entire clan, and his brother from the Western Jin Dynasty didn't say anything about his whereabouts? The author stayed away from names as he wrote. The King of Chu's daughter-in-law was called the princess, and the city lord's wife was called the city lord's wife. He didn't say where the Tan or the like was, whether he was pursuing Yu Jin, or who the Tan or whatever's eldest brother was talking about who had taken refuge in Beidi, and he didn't introduce it either? The monk didn't have any lines, the prince of the Western Jin Dynasty was so awesome and disappeared without any ending. The heroine's parents didn't say anything. Didn't Qinghui not know that Yujin was a girl? Why did she call her a girl in the end? Oh, the more she talks about it, the more outrageous it becomes. There are a lot of things that haven't been written yet, and it just ends like this. If I had known it would end badly, I wouldn't have read it.

Come on, it's super good-looking and the male lead is so patient.

It's beautiful. After reading it, I couldn't calm down for a long time. Tears lingered in my eyes. Although I am a man, I fell in love with this book. I burst into tears after reading it. My brother didn't cry. I gave my brother a slap in the face, so he cried too.