The Witch Got into Trouble

I can't stand it anymore. The heroine is not very smart and is too arrogant. She has encountered her several times and thought it was abnormal. She also thought it might be an illusion. Are you worthy of your special physique? I thought the content would be concise with fewer words, but I didn't expect it to be very wordy. The same dream and encounter plot can be repeated several times. The male protagonist's image is not very good. Although he tries not to reveal his true identity in order to help the heroine grow, is it necessary for you to always show your face to the heroine from time to time? And it always overwrites the heroine's memory of seeing their conversation. I wrote it many times, which made me irritated.

The plot and setting are both great

It looks good, but can it be updated faster?

Well, there are a lot of scary (supernatural) places here. I hope the author will not connect the supernatural places when writing a new book. Can you calm down a little bit when it comes to supernatural things? I seriously suspect that this is a text version of a ghost movie. Even if you don't watch it in the middle of the night, you will easily get scared. It's just a personal opinion. I'm afraid that supernatural beings will be scary, but I like to read magical and fantasy things. After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't bear the constant weird events. This book is not only weird at the beginning, but also weird in the middle. I'm used to seeing weird things at the beginning but not weird at the end, or only once in a while, and I'm not used to it anymore, so I'm not used to it. Sorry. Of course I watched it in the middle of the night

Looks good, but a bit too short

The plot is average, and the transition of emotional lines is too blunt! The male and female protagonists were so indifferent before, but suddenly they got better! The male classmate who has a crush on the heroine was clearly quite polite before, but suddenly he becomes so stubborn and extremely arrogant! It feels like the author just changed the character for the sake of the plot! There are so many things without details! I'm still confused after reading it! By the end, it felt like it was a science fiction movie!

It's very beautiful, I recommend everyone to go see it.

Love it, love it, much faster, more and more

Okay, but it's written from a first-person perspective. I don't really like this.

Is this book finished? ? Author