Non-Human Keepers

The subject matter is very novel, but the heroine's writing is disgusting and silly.

I was deceived by the rating, I don't know why it has such a high rating. I don't know what he was talking about throughout the whole process. The writing style is very good, but the whole story line is vague. Do you think the story line is full? But in fact, it cannot support logic at all and cannot bring any emotional value. The only value is to tell people to care for the environment? Accepted

I was recommended to read this book by others. The previous readings are quite good, but I can't stand Aplysia. What the hell? Why do you have to have this kind of plot? It's not that you don't accept gay men, but that you can't accept it. If you want to write a book like this, it's disgusting. Why do you treat the male protagonist in your novel like this? Psychopath. Goodbye.

Deliberately creating tragedy and suffering, the topic selection is very imaginative, but the writing power is insufficient. The heroine's aura is super big. Some plots are very intellectual, I hope the author can practice his writing well.

This reminds me of "Rose in No Man's Land" "I burned everything just to keep you" "I want to keep you So cover your eyes If you want to leave Just make you half asleep put my rose Hiding in no man's land"

So this space was created by mermaids?

Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is okay. The male protagonist feels broken and abused. The female protagonist is charming. The main point is that the male protagonist is an outsider. There is some sexual tension but not much. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The story is bland, the suspense is poorly written, and the horror atmosphere is not exaggerated. The plot is confusing, and the heroine is weak from beginning to end. She has a low IQ and does not feel comfortable, and she has no sweet pet. It is very pretentious. I don't understand love throughout the story. The world view is messy. When I reach 80, I have barely entered a normal city. I feel like I can hide this world full of monsters? ? The love line... Is not good-looking, and it all depends on the male protagonist's good looks.

That is to say, it does look good now, and the writing is also very good, but why does it look so similar to Desaro Mermaid? I really feel conflicted and can't stand it anymore.

It was really overwhelming at the beginning, but I felt very uncomfortable after reading it. I felt that the plot of the last 10 chapters could be described clearly in 100 chapters, and everyone's feelings for Ah Rou could be described in more detail. The ending is not a bad ending, but it is too rushed and not enough to watch.

Narcissus was so cruel in the early stage, but he wasn't that sweet in the end. Xiaoyue didn't even have a few words of description at the end. It can be seen that the author's favorite is Alphinaud. The plot takes up too much and the heroine can be found every time. It's pitiful that Lucifer was tortured in various timelines.