Nine Heavens Immortality Technique

I can't stand the first chapter. The protagonist is written like a child with Down's Syndrome. I can't even figure out the reason why he has been left out for so many years. I still have to find his father to sue his elder brother. With such an intelligence and temperament, it's better not to waste time.

It blows the protagonist very hard, but he is restrained in every aspect. I don't like it. It's too depressing.

Too wordy and not exciting. Others can read thousands of chapters, but you have no interest in reading hundreds of chapters.

Everything depends on the writer. If you want him to go, go ahead. If you don't want him to go, you won't go even if you don't want him to go.

The writing is simply appalling, and the thinking is illogical and poor.

Which chapter is this? It's both Ji Yi and Huo Xiao's? ? If it doesn't work, then don't come out and write a book, okay? ? ?

This book is becoming more and more difficult to understand. It is the only book in which Tianji Pavilion is written as a bad guy.

Very few men read eunuch works

This kind of male protagonist is so stupid. He has ruined your mother's ranking. You don't know that he has ruined the ranking of his 18th generation of ancestors. They don't think you are a family member, but you pitifully regard yourself as a family member. This is too bad.

The writing is okay, but it feels a bit rushed, not very rigorous, and not enjoyable to read.