After the Divorce, I Married a Tycoon with My Child

VThe plot is wonderful, the sentences are smooth and the writing is beautiful.

I was rescued too many times. The plot repeats. The ending is gratuitous.

The first part is well written and fascinating, but the second part is a little confusing. The names are often used incorrectly, and readers need to switch by themselves. There are a lot of typos, and from the plot point of view, it is also a bit anticlimactic. In the first part, it is written that the three Rongcheng brothers are very powerful, but in the end, they are dead and in a vegetative state. Only Rong Jiuci is alive, and that is Qin Yehan. A wedding that was voluntarily given up, but if one didn't give up, no plans or measures could be seen to stop it. Xiao Liu, a very good man, became a vegetative state because of the scheme of the bitch who was sponsored by his family, and he never woke up in the end. Song Xiaosan also ended up with his family ruined because of the woman his family adopted. Is the author reminding readers that they cannot be good people? Why can't we write a perfect ending, let Xiao Liu wake up, let Qin Yehan fall in love with Qiu Meng, let Song Xiaosan fall into a coma in a car accident, let Yi Chu understand that all hatred is not as important as the person in front of him, and finally wake up and make up for it. Yi Chu's half life has been hard enough. Of course, this is just my hope. I hope that the world will be more beautiful. After all the wind and rain, there will be a rainbow in the end!

**For the degree, please refer to the recent "Love as Camp"

The author Jian's writing style needs to be improved. It looks like a new student. The description is beginning and ending.

The heroine is such a virgin that she doesn't even know how to fight back after being bullied like this.

It's not good to watch. I've never seen such a stupid and holy heroine. The male protagonist is also stupid as hell. After watching it for two days, the heroine has not made any progress. The plot is dragging. I don't want to watch it anymore.

How should I put it? There are really too many templates. It is basically a unity of contradictions. Since the male protagonist has such a powerful brain? Don't children need firmness? Shouldn't we choose the most confidential method to make DAN? How did Ye Wanxin do it? A being who is more powerful than the male protagonist

Wasn't her name Li Qingzhi before?

I have finished reading this book. I recommend it. It is very good.