Emperor Danwu

The author doesn't know anything about ancient Chinese culture! The human race is the descendant of the dragon, that is, the descendant of the dragon clan, and the female beauty of the Tushan Fox clan is the wife of the human race Dayu, and her descendants established the Xia Dynasty. And in this book, they all turn into human-eating monsters! Absolutely no common sense! If you are still writing novels about cultivating immortals at this level, why not read up on ancient Chinese myths and related ancient books and legends?

It's so verbose. You can say everything, do anything, and kill everything. I can't stand it anymore. It's like a child playing house.

People in the past didn't clean up the battlefield?

Ye Lingyun-Ye Lingyun can't tell the difference

This book is stolen, and Ye Xuanlu is revealed in it

The villains are all the same fools, and the bystanders are all keyboard warriors. After reading 700 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

The more I read, the more I despise it. For the sake of a small profit, the author made the character's character grindy and clumsy. He added a few extra words, which lowered the character's image and lowered the author's level. Why bother?

What is the author doing for this? It is a good book with a compact storyline, but why is it that when portraying the protagonist, the characters are not prioritized? The more critical the moment, the more ink is lost. Is it worth lowering the character's image just for a small profit?

When I read Chapter 391, I felt uncomfortable reading it. Shouldn't writing a novel have ups and downs along with the storyline? Writing novels should also be humane, right? In these chapters, the protagonist saves his mother. When he already knows that his mother is facing life or death, shouldn't the author portray the protagonist's sense of urgency? After all, this is a mother-son relationship. These chapters are still describing various magical powers in detail, and there is no sense of urgency to save people.

Could it be that I learned a fake idiom? What I learned was " through out" and Dà Piao F P P C H P H P H A YI, and the idiom of "this matter" is capitalized as "this is the story"...