The Sword That Destroys the Heavens

Don't write a book about dragon. The dragon represents a hypocrite.

Don't always mention your dying sister, human life is worthless

It's okay at first, no need to read later

It's a good book, but the ending is a bit busy, as if you are rushing to be reincarnated!!!!

Nonsense nonsense accounts for 90% of the text. I hope I know how to concise my speech and not be sloppy!

It was really bad, and it ended inexplicably.

If you write about something bigger, you wish you could write 10,000 words, but the part about the Qing family in Baicao City is speechless, the protagonist is dumbfounded, and the side characters talk endlessly, and it immediately makes the novel seem to be of no quality.

There is too much nonsense, it only takes a second to cut or stab, but it takes a lot of memories and bragging to explain.

Too Moji. A competition requires more than ten pieces of writing.

There is too much foreshadowing. You have to keep writing about a scene.