Lin Ming traveled through the world of Journey to the West, bound to the system, and remained in the mysterious space. He would never be born until he became a saint of heaven.
Many disciples came to the door one after another. The eldest disciple, Sun Wukong, beat the invincible hand in the heaven with a magic stick!
The second disciple, Li Chengqian, opened up the prosperous Tang Dynasty with a divine sword, unified the world, and created a glorious Tang Dynasty!
Third disciple...
One disciple after another became a saint, and the big bosses of Journey to the West couldn't help but explore their sect.
Sun Wukong: My master is Lin Ming!
Li Chengqian: My master is Lin Ming!
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Lin Ming: It's over. I can't go on anymore. I was exposed by my disciples.
Chapter 40: Abandoned Book, I don't know where this 8:09 mark comes from. Are there too many sailors? Please comment a little bit. First of all, what is the description of the third apprentice of the protagonist? The eldest apprentice Sun Wukong and the second apprentice Li Zhi, these two are okay, they are self-aware, respect their teachers, and do things that are not out of the ordinary. What about the third apprentice, a woman, the princess of the daughter country, who can act crazy just because she is a woman? The protagonist said everything would be easy, but on the first day on the mountain, this female apprentice took advantage of her daughter to act rogue? Don't you listen to the warning? Can you ignore the two great immortals? She is just a mortal, so she is not worried at all? On the first day when we went up the mountain, there was a monkey with a sharp mouth and monkey cheeks. In the eyes of mortals, Wukong was a monster. What kind of thing was this female disciple? She was forced to be smart and fearless? Forced to cheat? Forcibly arrogant? This is a complete failure. On this point, this book is not even rated at 8:05, and there are other demerits. The second demerit is the writing style. The first ten or twenty chapters are barely written. Although it is not beautiful, it is indeed readable. In the thirty or so chapters, after the people of the Dragon Clan obtained magical powers from the sacred trees, the style of painting changed, and it was like a different author. It was originally a diary of a high school graduate, but suddenly it became an elementary school student writing an essay, which was very abrupt. , When the Dragon King went to heaven to ask for other volumes of the sacred tree, he clearly said that I wanted other volumes of the sacred tree. What conditions can you put forward, but the result is that Nezha thought it was given away for free, and he said, wait, the sacred tree is not given to you for free, we have conditions. Although it is not the original text, it means exactly the same. Others have already asked you to put forward conditions, and you still say, "I won't give it away for free, I want conditions?" ? ? Damn, this writing is amazing, just like in reality, Party B says to Party A, you sign this contract, I will give you benefits, Party A says, wait, the contract is not in vain, I want benefits, isn't this a contradiction? So, will Party B give this benefit? Third, it's logic. When the protagonist in the article was educating his apprentices, he said that the second apprentice's skills were so good that he would practice faster than the first apprentice. As a result, when the first apprentice became a Daluo, it only took him ten or twenty years, and the second apprentice only took more than thirty years to become Taiyi? Did the author forget what he wrote? Let's just talk about these three points. After all, we have just read Chapter 40, and there are already these problems in the content of Chapter 40. No matter how the subsequent writing is, can this book reach 8.9? 7:05 At most, okay. The writing is not good, the logic is illogical, and the characters are broken. There will probably be a protagonist with attributes of the Holy Mother in the future, because with the appearance of this third apprentice, it will be unreasonable for the protagonist not to be the Holy Mother. Moreover, the third apprentice will be like this, later on If there are a few more female apprentices, will they kill the other brothers on the first day of their apprenticeship? If they can't kill them, they will ask the protagonist for help. Say, Master, help me kill all the brothers. I want them to be destroyed. If you don't help me, you are not a human being? ? Damn it. That's it, overall score, seven points, recommendation index, two stars
In fact, this is the best way to write a book. Nowadays, many book writers write books with different plots. Many of them have the same plot. After reading it, it seems that the names are just changed in the books. They are very similar. Everyone is reading the original plot over and over again. It is not as good as the original work.
The third disciple is really disgusting. He also behaves like a rebel against his master. He doesn't know how to respect his master. If he doesn't like it at all, he starts to bully his master and destroy his ancestors. It's really disgusting.
As a new member of the forum, I don't dare to speak loudly in the forum, and I don't dare to offend others. I can only comment silently and then turn around and leave. The movements should be fast, the posture should be handsome, and the merit and fame should be hidden deeply.
The author, the timeline is wrong, 500 years after Sun Wukong was pinned under Wuzhi Mountain, it was the Tang Dynasty
Although it is an unfinished chapter, usually the protagonist will immediately destroy Hongjun when he gets to the big road. There is no need to go back and forth for a long time like other stories... If he has the strength, he will be destroyed directly.
The introduction is wrong, Li Zhi is written as Li Chengqian, otherwise you write Li Chengqian, otherwise you write Li Zhi
The End – a must read! ——Very good, powerful, vulgar, I like it very much
Finished - it's okay, it's okay
Finished - you can see to the end! Invincible traditional flow!
Chapter 40: Abandoned Book, I don't know where this 8:09 mark comes from. Are there too many sailors? Please comment a little bit. First of all, what is the description of the third apprentice of the protagonist? The eldest apprentice Sun Wukong and the second apprentice Li Zhi, these two are okay, they are self-aware, respect their teachers, and do things that are not out of the ordinary. What about the third apprentice, a woman, the princess of the daughter country, who can act crazy just because she is a woman? The protagonist said everything would be easy, but on the first day on the mountain, this female apprentice took advantage of her daughter to act rogue? Don't you listen to the warning? Can you ignore the two great immortals? She is just a mortal, so she is not worried at all? On the first day when we went up the mountain, there was a monkey with a sharp mouth and monkey cheeks. In the eyes of mortals, Wukong was a monster. What kind of thing was this female disciple? She was forced to be smart and fearless? Forced to cheat? Forcibly arrogant? This is a complete failure. On this point, this book is not even rated at 8:05, and there are other demerits. The second demerit is the writing style. The first ten or twenty chapters are barely written. Although it is not beautiful, it is indeed readable. In the thirty or so chapters, after the people of the Dragon Clan obtained magical powers from the sacred trees, the style of painting changed, and it was like a different author. It was originally a diary of a high school graduate, but suddenly it became an elementary school student writing an essay, which was very abrupt. , When the Dragon King went to heaven to ask for other volumes of the sacred tree, he clearly said that I wanted other volumes of the sacred tree. What conditions can you put forward, but the result is that Nezha thought it was given away for free, and he said, wait, the sacred tree is not given to you for free, we have conditions. Although it is not the original text, it means exactly the same. Others have already asked you to put forward conditions, and you still say, "I won't give it away for free, I want conditions?" ? ? Damn, this writing is amazing, just like in reality, Party B says to Party A, you sign this contract, I will give you benefits, Party A says, wait, the contract is not in vain, I want benefits, isn't this a contradiction? So, will Party B give this benefit? Third, it's logic. When the protagonist in the article was educating his apprentices, he said that the second apprentice's skills were so good that he would practice faster than the first apprentice. As a result, when the first apprentice became a Daluo, it only took him ten or twenty years, and the second apprentice only took more than thirty years to become Taiyi? Did the author forget what he wrote? Let's just talk about these three points. After all, we have just read Chapter 40, and there are already these problems in the content of Chapter 40. No matter how the subsequent writing is, can this book reach 8.9? 7:05 At most, okay. The writing is not good, the logic is illogical, and the characters are broken. There will probably be a protagonist with attributes of the Holy Mother in the future, because with the appearance of this third apprentice, it will be unreasonable for the protagonist not to be the Holy Mother. Moreover, the third apprentice will be like this, later on If there are a few more female apprentices, will they kill the other brothers on the first day of their apprenticeship? If they can't kill them, they will ask the protagonist for help. Say, Master, help me kill all the brothers. I want them to be destroyed. If you don't help me, you are not a human being? ? Damn it. That's it, overall score, seven points, recommendation index, two stars
In fact, this is the best way to write a book. Nowadays, many book writers write books with different plots. Many of them have the same plot. After reading it, it seems that the names are just changed in the books. They are very similar. Everyone is reading the original plot over and over again. It is not as good as the original work.
The third disciple is really disgusting. He also behaves like a rebel against his master. He doesn't know how to respect his master. If he doesn't like it at all, he starts to bully his master and destroy his ancestors. It's really disgusting.
As a new member of the forum, I don't dare to speak loudly in the forum, and I don't dare to offend others. I can only comment silently and then turn around and leave. The movements should be fast, the posture should be handsome, and the merit and fame should be hidden deeply.
The author, the timeline is wrong, 500 years after Sun Wukong was pinned under Wuzhi Mountain, it was the Tang Dynasty
Although it is an unfinished chapter, usually the protagonist will immediately destroy Hongjun when he gets to the big road. There is no need to go back and forth for a long time like other stories... If he has the strength, he will be destroyed directly.
The introduction is wrong, Li Zhi is written as Li Chengqian, otherwise you write Li Chengqian, otherwise you write Li Zhi
The End – a must read! ——Very good, powerful, vulgar, I like it very much
Finished - it's okay, it's okay
Finished - you can see to the end! Invincible traditional flow!