Qingmou

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 73. Disadvantage 1: Each character appears directly with his or her name and runs away from the plot. There is no description of the character's appearance or relationship, and some descriptions will be added here and there in subsequent chapters. From the reader's point of view, a stranger appears out of nowhere to take part in the plot, and he is confused. Only after reading the story can he reluctantly piece together the character. Disadvantage 2: The plot is blunt, and it basically describes the subjective consciousness of the heroine. The reader is confused, because there is no introduction such as character background and background, so we just read what the heroine thinks. Anyway, the readers don't know anything, just let the heroine lead their thoughts. (In fact, I felt very uncomfortable watching it and wanted to curse. The author doesn't think that he is so sophisticated in his writing that is deliberately misleading by cutting off the beginning and ending, right?) Disadvantage 3: There are too many things that are not etiquette. I can only tell myself that this is an empty text. The rules and etiquette are different. For example, if the heroine's father dies, she does not need to observe filial piety, and she can dress up and attend a banquet after three months; for example, the heroine's second uncle, a disabled person, can still enter the court as an official; for example, a woman can start her own business, and the heroine's sisters have inherited the family business without leaving the court after their father died, and no one will make irresponsible remarks. There are no clan relatives to help; for example, there are almost no male and female guards. The heroine can just meet and chat with any man she wants. When the heroine goes to the hero's house, there is never any description of meeting the elders first, let alone the ambiguous relationship with the second male protagonist who suddenly appears, and there is no solemn grandma with her... Flaw 4: The biggest flaw is the heroine. I originally planned to read the previous problems as a cool novel and get over it, but the heroine was originally a calm and rational character who was reborn to take revenge and repay a favor at the beginning of the story. After meeting the male protagonist, she became a bit coquettish and naive (anyway, the male protagonist) He also needs to have some halo as the male protagonist), the male protagonist didn't even write a few chapters before a guy named He popped up (suspected to be the second male lead?) And fell in love with the female protagonist at first sight and stalked her. Then the female protagonist agreed to be friends with him because she was "afraid that he would fall in love with her" and then started to get entangled with him. Rescued the man named He and pretended to be an unmarried couple with him → We went to the lake to catch fish together and turned into playing in the water together → She chased him and escaped → He drowned and she was heartbroken and went into the water desperately to find him → She was drowned and remembered some unknown memory and was so heartbroken that she shed tears and even vomited blood. He gave her the life-saving medicine without hesitation... I went from being confused to confused to constipated. I couldn't understand why the author wanted to pull this line. At first, I thought that the author's writing style was just jerky, which resulted in the characters and plot being described rather abruptly. But overall, I could see that there was an outline and framework, so I got over it after a while. However, there were a lot of bugs in just a few dozen chapters, and even the character of the main character was off-kilter. It was inexplicable. When I read the comments and complained about the unfinished heroine, it was as if she had been snatched away from her previous life, so I simply abandoned the article and ran away.

A better interpretation of the meaning of life, a hundred years is like duckweed, like a dream bubble

Personally, I think the two pictures of "The Return of the Child" are a bit confusing and the subsequent happy moments are a bit rushed.

I couldn't stand the plot anymore. From the time travel to the weird and bizarre scenes, I got dizzy and gave up. I originally liked a work, but the more I read it, the less interesting it becomes. It's a waste of time. Give up and delete it.

The writing style is readable, and the thinking is very different. Unfortunately, the first part of the plot is acceptable, but most of the latter part is about describing what unrelated people say, what they say, and what the common people think and say. It is simply the handiwork of two authors. As for making the words so clear, are all readers of the novel stupid and need the author's comprehensive explanation to understand it?

It looks good from the front. What follows is really hard to describe. Maybe it's because I'm not smart enough to read it. Writing is not easy, keep working hard

In fact, the ancient part at the beginning is very good and the story line is very complete. The fantasy part at the end is a bit of a drag on the whole story. Instead, it leads to confusing character relationships and too many clues. You can only skip the rest of the story.

The more I read later, the more confusing it becomes, just trying to make up the word count; abandoning the text.

I don't know where such a high score came from. Is it all a favor?

The subject matter is interesting and not cookie-cutter. I hope the author can write better works in the future.