The Most Arrogant Son-in-Law in History

Lin Feng: This country will fall without me

Are you talking about me? I'm here to ruin your life

If you hit me in the face every day, you'll get a broken bone

Wouldn't you just ask for the second product?

Overall, it's quite good. The theme is well conceived and the logic is relatively rigorous. However, the classical Chinese expressions are still at the old-fashioned storytelling level and seem a bit stiff. It would be better if there were fewer team battles.

Except for copying poems, other writing styles are too lacking, and the narrative is straightforward, with almost no highlights.

It's too peaceful, it's a mouthful of prose, I can't stand it anymore

The billion-fold reward system has been loaded✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

At the beginning, I won a poem about pig's feet, so I canceled the order and refused to make the deal. In the next chapter, if I won, it changed to three-day delivery. I couldn't stand it.

After seeing Chapter 14, a brief comment: There are many typos, and the names are also confused. Secondly, the first chapter clearly states that Bai Yuyao defeated one husband to death, and the sixth chapter says that he defeated two husbands. Could it be that Bai Yuyao knew that Lin Feng died in the past, and this one was passed through by his soul? Obviously unreasonable. Secondly, Lin Fengli has a dedicated character setting, saying that he is one person for one life and two people, and later breaks the memorial. It is really nonsense. If you can't write such a pure character setting, then just don't write it. It sounds disgusting at the same time! Then Bai Yuyao looked like a brother and a husband, and he seemed to have no temper at all. Forcibly reasoning, forcibly exaggerating the level of knowledge, and forcibly establishing a character, it means nothing!