God

All I can say is that I don't do any drafting when cheating. I break through at the critical moment and then get violent. The plot is really rubbish.

It's not cheating all the way and it's so disgusting, why can't you write a more normal book? Every opportunity comes to the male protagonist. Speechless. In this ending, his grandfather is so much stronger than him and he can beat Speechless. Moreover, he really doesn't show any filial piety. This ending is really cheating.

The storyline is okay, but the description in some places is too much nonsense.

It could have been written in a few hundred chapters, but people who write novels are so smart that they end up writing so much nonsense.

It's such nonsense that I don't know how to write it. I really admire people who write novels now.

The characters onlookers talk more than the protagonist, and they are all gibberish.

In the end, the author of the main character was very miserable. He fell into your toilet and drowned. It was the result of lust.

What can be said in one sentence is forced to be written in a chapter.

The writing on strength and realm is a bit bad. You can defeat the Mysterious Realm just by forging your body. So what's the use of the Xuan Realm? Does that make you invincible in the Mysterious Realm?

There is really too much nonsense, and a good book has suffered like this.