Peerless Demon Ancestor

Cheating and random writing, different logic

Is it over before the writing is finished?

Rubbish ending, don't waste your time watching it

The first 20 chapters are very interesting, and the author has put great care into it! The last five hundred chapters can only be said to be a continuous loop of the plot, watching others fight, fighting back and forth for five or six chapters, and then coming to the rescue! And then it goes back and forth over and over again, whether you like this writing technique or not!

It's a cool article, and the whole article is about fighting against heaven and earth, never stopping, but it's like driving a car at the speed of light and it becomes boring! The purpose of this article is that the Demon Emperor is reborn and returns to change all regrets and at the same time change the miserable fate of others! However, although this article will also mention it, it will only be mentioned briefly. These are the essence of the novel, but the author actually avoided them! Looking at the writing style of this article, it may be difficult for you to know how to write? The protagonist is reborn after three thousand years and returns with a treasure trove. He can become invincible with just one formation. The most embarrassing thing is that the treasure trove was disabled in order to make the whole story longer. The protagonist has a thousand more Dantians than others, so his cultivation is slow! We are always plundering, and there are always enemies who are a level higher than our own. We fight the young ones and the old ones, and kill the old ones to get even older ones! Are these routines from eight hundred years ago still used? I always do a few chapters of foreshadowing and then write a chapter of harvest. It's extremely boring to start over and over again! The summary of the whole story is that it has been upgrading until the end, when the world is invincible and there is no way to rise, the whole drama ends! No reading experience at all! As an old devil, the protagonist is always full of insidious methods, making him a huge headache for the enemy! After being reborn, the good guy became brainless. If something happened, he would rush in and out. If he couldn't beat him, he would perform a breakthrough on the spot. If he couldn't, he would rely on luck to improve his cultivation! The most childish part was when he went to kill people and actually fought with others in the ring, but ended up killing them all! It's quite embarrassing for an old devil and a group of children to kill each other!

How do I put it? It says that the author forgot about the previous pitfalls or forgot about the original setting. For example, Yunlan Sect was said to be a 4-star sect at first, but after writing a few chapters, it became a 7-star sect. There are also a lot of pitfalls that have not been filled in. I just write whatever comes to my mind. It's good to read this kind of book to pass the time. Also, most of the names and experiences of the protagonist's disciples are from other books, such as Xiao Yan, Nalan Yanran, Monkey King, Enan Poison Body, Mortal Cultivation to Immortality...

I only have the first half, but I don't plan to write the second half. Why not write it in one article? You can't bite off more than you can chew.

1000 Dantian and still so useless

Important tip! ! ! It sucks. The protagonist only appears at the end every time, remember, every time, once or twice is okay, but you appear almost dead every time, and the useless master has no use from beginning to end except adding chaos and still survives to the end. This is the biggest failure, and this book is not finished, so it is not recommended to read.

The unfinished project is not good. It needs to be continued.