Fengguijin

The author's writing style is average

The plot is pretty good, the male and female protagonists both like it, and the author writes it well

Such an illogical article with a plot about a 4-year-old child playing house actually got 9 points? All those who surrendered depended on a big loaf of bread?

Can a gambler become a male protagonist? It simply ruins your outlook! You can't stand it after reading a few chapters, it's a bad lesson for readers.

Logical bugs and typos make up an article. Improper wording and disordered word order are also common. Alas...

Nice. Not a bad ending either ❤️. He said, "To tell you that my harem is very deserted, I am afraid that no concubine will come to greet you in this life. I have abolished the three palaces and six courtyards. Apart from some old people from the past, there are no new people in this harem!" "Nan'er!" Murong Chengye's eyes were full of affection, "In this life, I only want you and I will never let you down! He said, "One day after I, Murong Ziye, reigned, there was only one queen, Murong Chu, in the harem. I did not accept concubines, did not select drafts, abolished the three palaces and six courtyards, and from then on, I have been single-minded for the rest of my life!" "Murong, Chu family. Chu Zhinan was a little stunned when he heard this title. From then on, she will be recorded in the royal family tree, which reads: Murong Chu family, named Zhinan. And he also said that from then on, he would be single-minded for the rest of his life. He added, "Because of this, my world cannot survive without you. Xiao Nan'er, you are everything to me. My heart is particularly small. The small one can only accommodate you and cannot accommodate anyone else. "

The writing style is not high enough. It seems to be very cultured, and the words "love" are forced to be "joy". The pauses in the sentences are expressed by commas and dashes, which is very stiff. The emotional progression of the male and female protagonists is equally blunt, the dialogue is stiff, the plot is stiff, and the relationship is also stiff, with no sense of substitution. You can't think deeply about it logically. What the servants inside do is very brainless and completely inconsistent with the ancient background.

The heroine is held in high esteem. If she is so powerful, why did she lose so miserably in her previous life?

The career line is not a tacky harem or house story, a sweet pet story, but the plot of the male protagonist is just passed by, and the story of a big female protagonist is

There are too many typos... It's hard and uncomfortable to read...