Mortal Girl's Journey to Immortality

In order to show the improvement of the heroine's character, did he deliberately write the heroine into a very different state of mind, and how many times did she want to become possessed? It's so outrageous and inconsistent. I write whatever comes to mind. The master's combat power is also written down and forget about it... I thought I could probably read it, but I can't stand it anymore after seeing this.

Author! Why do you! Put the exclamation point! Treat it as a comma! Period! It's being used! ! ! ! ! ! !

Isn't it really a bit ruined in the end? The spiritual beast is causing trouble everywhere. It insists on barbeque and beats people to death on the territory of Buddhist cultivators. It's really annoying that the heroine has to protect the spiritual beast.

I'm really convinced by the author, you're a pure boy's mother. Why are boys the good guys and bad and the image that girls create for girls? I'm really convinced.

The plot of this book is very attractive, and the writing is also okay. But the heroine feels so weird. Her left and right brains are completely fighting each other. Many operations are inexplicable. The plots she has experienced are all very interesting. Once she gets along with others, social plots suddenly become violent. She jumps while watching, and she can't catch up halfway through.

The female lead snatched things from the Nascent Soul stage during her Qi training stage and then ran away.

It's just average. A group of golden elixirs beat someone's Yuanying into a god and beat him to death. It's outrageous.

The author has no overall perspective, writes about dreams, has a messy sense of time, and the heroine is really unlikable, bad review

It's so embarrassing, I can't stand it, and I always make a ghostly smile during fights! ! ! What?

When did the equality contract change?