Mech War: Full Metal Storm

The writing is really good. The character Wei Fenghua really stands out.

Allen: I'm familiar with this situation ~ But at that time I was with (whispers) my partner Luo:…

I've read this far, and if I hadn't known that it was almost over, I really wasn't sure I could continue reading... The details of "fighting monsters" come and go, accounting for more than 60% to 70% of the book, right? The progress of the plot is not very focused. Well, I won't abandon the book at this point, but Mr. Author, I won't do it next time.

Many things that are not fluent also have typos.

This book can be regarded as the longest book I have ever read. I originally thought that it would be like other books, and I would have no desire at all in the middle and later stages, but Ji Zhan was not like that. It didn't have that kind of fierce passion, but it seemed to be extremely gentle without losing its charm. It kept guiding me to read, and the more I read, the more interesting it became. This book is really top-notch in the mecha genre, but I also discovered a lot of problems while reading it. Let me talk about the most important ones. The first is that Lao Luo's eyes are always blind sometimes. Why doesn't Lao Chen always use these glasses? Just look at the case of Gaba and it is closed. It has to be so troublesome. It is heart-wrenching to read. Second, there are many holes dug in the early stage that have not been filled. For example, Zhe Kui said that the Tongxuan Realm is the incomplete Xuanyao Realm, which the author did not explain; and the Nine Knocks on the Heavenly Gate opened three doors, and the ones at the back were eaten. Let me introduce them briefly. There are also those powerful thrones that were foreshadowed in the early stage, as well as Xiaobai's desolate gods. In the later stage, the evil demon suddenly melted like butter as soon as it came out, and there was no name. Lao Chen's explanation was the editor's urging. To be honest, this book could have been done better. By filling in the holes, extending the follow-up combat power, killing those thrones one by one, it should be much better when the evil demon comes out later. If I want to write like this, I can at least write 7.5-8 Million words. It's a pity.

Zhe Kui: It's over, Kui Kui, I'm afraid I don't have to leave any food.

In this case, either you will work in the Strategic Government as a technician or you will be captured by an organization and used for human experimentation.

Direct votes are given! The plot is exciting and dense without being too watery, and the laughs and foreshadowing are both online! I beg all book friends to connect with three clicks: monthly recommendation ticket + collection + follow, leave a few more comments and chatter, urge the author to add more updates crazily, and have enough exciting plots!

The big hook is a wolf. The big hook is a wolf. The big hook is a wolf. The big hook is a wolf.

Chapter 1000 is just a breaking point, the rest of it won't be good, so skip ahead and read it. The main reason why it doesn't look good 1. There are too many passers-by in supporting roles, and there are often only one and a half chapters, and there is a lot of nonsense. 2. The function of the eyes is so great that it will basically be useless in the later stage. You have to fiddle with it before using it. It is uncomfortable to see when it is online and offline. 3. The battle for the heroine, I can only say that it is a mess. If you write the heroine, just write it. The question is whether the heroine also writes so many detailed scenes, and it can be summed up in one stroke. Summary: Just go ahead and watch it, don't get too carried away.