Better to Marry the Villain's Lucky Rival Than Be a Cannon-Fodder Supporting Character

There is a serious contradiction between the character creation and the direction of the plot. The previous paragraph of the same chapter is like this, but the next paragraph is written differently. There are also many bugs. Sometimes it is a biological child, and sometimes it is not.

The front is nice, but the back is hard to watch and starts skipping chapters.

Relying on intelligence to forcibly create conflicts to advance the plot is quite boring. Even if the supporting characters don't have IQ, it's really uncomfortable for the female protagonist to be like that. Moreover, the male protagonist likes the female protagonist emotionally and inexplicably suddenly falls in love with her. It's very abrupt.

It's too procrastinating. In many places, it's forced on the mind, which makes it uncomfortable to read. I don't know whether I want to write a cool article or something else.

I feel like the author's writing style isn't too bad, but it gives the impression that it's extremely uneducated, or that's intentional. Many words are typos, idioms, and sayings, none of which are written correctly. There must be a typo or an inversion. Note, it's everyone, everyone! Some particularly commonly used sayings or idioms are spelled incorrectly. It feels like it was intentional~

After reading Chapter 130, the big thing that has been done so far is that the heroine broke off the marriage, the heroine's parents have not yet reconciled, the original heroine slept with Na Duanwang, and there was no follow-up. There was no follow-up on the dragon and phoenix private treasury key, which was said to be asked by the grandmother, and the author is just like dreaming. He just writes whatever he writes. The most irritating thing is that the heroine is a retired fast-traveling agent who is so good at flirting with men. Has she never been in love? The male protagonist fell in love with her, and he would not marry her unless she did it. He even put it aside and said: Brother, we are just friends, I just want to use my luck~~ Don't waste the male and female protagonists. The male protagonist is brave and resourceful and written as a licking dog, and the female protagonist is smart and starry as a green tea and white lotus. If you don't know how to write a relationship line, you just write it as a partner. You have to abuse me on this matter. It's disgusting.

The ending was caught off guard, and the good holes were not filled. The finale talked about how much benefit the hero's country got after the mutual trade, and things from other countries could not be sold. It was nonsense. It was about mutual benefit. It was not written that the country without the protagonist would not get any benefits at all, and could only contribute money. No matter how bad the country is, there are good products. Otherwise, so many merchants went to the grasslands to sell things and then buy local products.

They all told you not to come out, but you have to come out and have a kiss.

This Tang Rulan doesn't know anything wrong, she can handle it

I've almost read the 200th chapter and it's boring.