Age of Steam 1886

The writing is beautiful, but there are a lot of typos!

Having read less than 100 chapters, I would give it a 5.5 Out of 10. There are indeed references in the plot, but it also has its own unique world view and culture. Chinese documents and explanations of gods are also quite distinctive. Generally speaking, I can rate a plot like this above 7 points without major flaws. What I can't accept is actually the problem with the author's writing style. Readers who don't require an immersive experience may be okay, but those who have a little bit of reading requirements can feel that the author's "urgency" in coding leads to serious mechanization of the narrative, overly tense paragraphs, and so on. I believe that the author's writing style will gradually improve, but I must also tell the author that human inspiration is actually limited, and each paragraph of each book must be meticulous to produce a masterpiece.

Forty photos haven't touched the supernatural yet, but the detective story is quite good and should be written as suspense.

The first is that there are too many similarities, and the second is that the deception is clearly about cultivating immortality.

It seems unlikely that bamboo pen holders would have appeared in Western Europe, where bamboo simply didn't exist. But if it is acceptable as an Eastern artwork.

It's all Le Le Le Le. Doesn't the author know how to write it?

I read the chapters about meeting Elizabeth, and then I didn't want to read anymore. There are only so many chapters about the first meeting, so the rest of the plot should be a little jumpy.

It completely copies the setting and theme of Lord of Mysteries, but slightly changes the plot. Even the characters are almost the same, but the writing is much worse.

Each paragraph is a lot of words, and the conciseness of words and sentences is not very good. I almost write whatever comes to mind. In fact, some unnecessary elements can be simplified, which makes me a little tired. Others are okay

A character in a Western fantasy novel speaks with a Northeastern accent. "What" "What" "Hey" I feel a little disgusted for no reason.