Yin Yang Makeup Artist

A good book, you can read it

I hate Zhang Wei so much. He makes mistakes every time. Others are good-tempered and tolerate him every time. He never teaches him a lesson. He lets him go when he doesn't understand anything. It's a big failure.

Which chapter is written about Lu Pheasant? Where are the captain and crew? I didn't even explain it, I just lost it, I'm so speechless [fake smile]

There are too many typos, and there are 2 duplicates

There are just too many typos haha...

This novel is good and very interesting. The author is brilliant and humorous.

Personally, I feel very good about it, and it's not a drag.

I loved reading this book when I first saw it. The plot in the middle part is quite exciting, and I also recommended it to my friends. But then the plot became more and more boring, and it was a bit unfinished, so it just fell into place. I recently had some free time and thought about reading it out and watching it from the beginning. The plot at the beginning is still not gripping enough: the heroine has not grown up at all times and is more carefree, and the amount of debt is inconsistent. It is really hard to watch.

From the author's name and some words and phrases in the book, it can be seen that the author should be educated and knowledgeable. The setting of the makeup artist is actually quite interesting, but maybe I watch more metaphysics and supernatural beings, so I felt that the plot at the beginning could not attract me. The sentences are fluent, but the portrayal of the protagonist is not very good. I can't feel the charm of the heroine. There is a lack of foreshadowing and explanation in some places, which makes the heroine impulsive and unreasonable. For example, Uncle Wu emphasized not to go out at night, but the heroine still rushed out without thinking, without sufficient psychological description and foreshadowing. Also, I feel that the writing style is very similar to that of a male channel. It may be because of this that so many male readers mistakenly entered the comments section and said that it turned out to be a female channel. As for the level of horror, maybe I've seen too much and didn't find it scary at all.

Good luck to the author. Overall, the story of this book is quite good. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit too concise. There are also a lot of typos and some repeated paragraphs.