How Is the Crazy Batch Queen Made?

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Life is like a chess game. Everyone wants to be the chess player on the chess board, but I, Su Shuishui, am the one who really stirs up the chess game.

The writing is good, but the plot arrangement is really too broken, and it feels like I'm watching a trailer that keeps pulling.

I feel like it's a pretty good story, especially when playing chess, there's an atmosphere of turning one's hands into clouds and rain. The male protagonist seems to be crazy about torturing the female protagonist and then saving her, which is very attractive. However, the arrangement of the plot feels rather confusing, and the prologue is too long. Generally, a prologue is about two thousand words, and the interludes are very attractive. However, the first chapter was arranged in a fragmented manner. It was obviously emotional, but suddenly there was a fragment of memory, which made it difficult to get into the drama again. I hope the prologue and first chapter can be rearranged. And looking at the following content, the heroine is written from the age of four, so she will meet the hero very late, which may not be affordable for a romance novel. (If a reader's feelings are different from his wife's, they can be ignored.)

How do you behave when you are tied up? You should write an eye scene, madam

There is no foreshadowing of her identity here, how do you know she is pampered? There should be some description of her beaten clothes earlier. It can be seen that they are made of good material. Is this reasonable?

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I think that although the heroine has traveled from modern times, she is not like other novels where she is silly and sweet and becomes the group's favorite once she crosses paths. Instead, she has experienced many things, which has turned the heroine into a crazy person. I think the heroine is also a pitiful person. People who love love in modern times are forced to time travel.

That's ridiculous, not very logical.

Su Shuishui is really a considerate and warm-hearted good girl.