Lin Yanli once passed through the book and became the reincarnation of the big devil Jiang Wanli. Her seven apprentices were already big men in the spiritual world. Without Jiang Wanli's heaven-defying cultivation, how could she discipline these evil disciples with impure thoughts?
The eldest disciple is a giant of loose cultivators, and he orders loose cultivators all over the world.
The second disciple is a swordsman chosen by heaven, and his sword skills are invincible.
The third disciple, Master Furong, is loved by all male cultivators in the world.
The four disciples, the holy monks of the West, saved all the wronged souls in the Nine Netherworld.
The five disciples became immortals and ruled the boundless territory of the Wood Realm.
The Sixth Disciple is a money-loving boy who only wants to spend money.
Seventh Disciple: I want to lift Master high.
Second Disciple: Junior brother, what you said makes sense.
Third Disciple: Master should come to my Furong Mountain to warm my bed.
First Disciple: Master is mine, fellow juniors, please don't take it away...
I don't quite understand why the rating is so low. The author's writing is very good, the plot is not sluggish, and there is nothing wrong with it overall. Every character seems to be alive and living around us, but why are the disciples not out? Every change in character and plot has a trace to follow. I really want to read the book "Haoran". Jiang Wanli is Jiang Wanli. Xiao Yanli is Xiao Yanli. They are different. I hope that in different dimensional walls, everyone will do well, aspire to the Nine Summits, act for the righteousness of the world, and live for the love of the heart.
(80/637)
A very, very boring novel, so boring that I don't even know how to write a book review. The symptoms are that I can't grasp the key points when listening to the book before going to bed, and the more I listen, the more annoyed I am and can't fall asleep. The more I read during the day, the more I feel sleepy. The highest evaluation for a novel that is boring: it is better to memorize the words. How can there be such a boring book when I can't even listen to it? How could a fantasy travel book with a villain come out so boring? I can feel that the author is trying hard to write in a funny direction, but it is really not easy to achieve the humor that comes easily. I feel so desperate.
[Contains spoilers]
I read elsewhere that someone said that the original heroine of this article was a good girl and did not follow the path of a vicious supporting actress who was jealous and framed the heroine. As a result, she only appeared in two of the first eighty chapters. She was also portrayed as a hypocrite who said to the victim, "Although he burns, kills, loots, and does all kinds of evil, he is not easy, so let's let him go." I guess it will be changed in the future, but the heroine's sighs and praise for her are really disgusting. It would be better to watch the vicious heroine confront her head-on.
The author probably wanted to write something. The main plot of Chapter 80 was to find his life experience and revitalize the sect. As a result, the personal plot was fishing every day without practicing, and the revitalization plot was pushed so smoothly that it seemed like a dream. I wrote a bunch of stuff, the pacing is slow, and none of it is attractive.
I originally wanted to give up on Chapter 29, but after some thought I settled on thirty, and then the first laugh point of this article appeared in Chapter 30. Heaven! Why are you doing this to me! My teeth are almost broken and I can't read fifty more chapters.
The heroine is the reincarnation of a big demon, and she goes back to her previous life. She vows to reform the sect and promulgates a series of rules. How can she turn the evil demon sect into a law-abiding and good citizen in just one sentence? Dingdangxiang, a poor sect, still dared to build infrastructure and tourism. Later, he made a lot of money by selling magic weapons from his previous life, but he actually spent one million on paintings? Ah? ! He accepted a group of untalented victims as handyman disciples, and also took back the villagers who bullied him in his previous life and treated him well. The treatment given was very favorable, so where did the money come from?
Rumor has it that the big devil does all kinds of evil and has boundless power. He wishes he could eat three children in one meal. The heroine has only one level of cultivation and has turned into a seven or eight-year-old. She is in charge of a group of disciples in the third and fourth realms who are obedient and dare not disobey because they don't know that the heroine has changed the core, and they are afraid of being beaten if they disobey. Then the heroine's apprentice took in three apprentices, all of whom were not very young. After knowing the heroine's identity, they bullied the heroine and found trouble with her. Ah? ?
The heroine's apprentices are all extremely powerful, but as a result, they don't remember a single thing. They come and leave inexplicably, and their attitude towards the heroine is also inexplicable.
There were many things I wanted to write about revitalizing the sect, improving my cultivation, discovering my life experience, and winning over disciples, but I couldn't get through any of them. It's rambling, inconsistent, and the rhythm is chaotic. How about calling the original body out and punching the earth.
In fact, I really want to see the original heroine of the Virgin Mary, not just talking arrogantly, but really taking "making everyone happy" engraved in her heart and putting it into action. In fact, it's not just the Virgin Mary. Every character who moves forward firmly to put Hongda's career into practice is very moving when written.
The plot setting is quite good.
I saw Chapter 70. Still can't stand it anymore.
Reason
1: The plot is messy and rambling. One moment I want to engage in tourism, another moment I want to develop, and the next moment I go shopping for no reason. There are a lot of things I want to write about, but I don't write them in detail. I just ramble on and cover too much at once. A mess.
2: The character design is weird, I feel like I have lost my mind.
For example, the protagonist's sect is extremely poor and needs to develop. I finally earned some spiritual stones by selling magic weapons. In the end, the protagonist used 1 million spiritual stones to buy calligraphy and paintings? Being lowered?
What is the use of calligraphy and painting? This is a fairy tale. In the world of cultivating immortals, can props that are useless for cultivating immortals be sold for 1 million spiritual stones? ?
The monetary system is in chaos.
3. Practice? I have never practiced.
All in all, the writing is very messy.
Give it up, give it up, the more I look at it, the more confused I become. I personally don't like this kind of thing.
Can I say that the sense of substitution is not strong?
I'm here, I'm here, Qiqi is visiting Dada!
Come on, let's do some cruelty (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻
I stayed up late again, I really liked the plot, neither too fast nor too slow.
Very interesting, I keep watching. I'll also leave a message to prove that I'm watching.
It sucks, but the front part looks pretty good.
I don't quite understand why the rating is so low. The author's writing is very good, the plot is not sluggish, and there is nothing wrong with it overall. Every character seems to be alive and living around us, but why are the disciples not out? Every change in character and plot has a trace to follow. I really want to read the book "Haoran". Jiang Wanli is Jiang Wanli. Xiao Yanli is Xiao Yanli. They are different. I hope that in different dimensional walls, everyone will do well, aspire to the Nine Summits, act for the righteousness of the world, and live for the love of the heart.
(80/637) A very, very boring novel, so boring that I don't even know how to write a book review. The symptoms are that I can't grasp the key points when listening to the book before going to bed, and the more I listen, the more annoyed I am and can't fall asleep. The more I read during the day, the more I feel sleepy. The highest evaluation for a novel that is boring: it is better to memorize the words. How can there be such a boring book when I can't even listen to it? How could a fantasy travel book with a villain come out so boring? I can feel that the author is trying hard to write in a funny direction, but it is really not easy to achieve the humor that comes easily. I feel so desperate. [Contains spoilers] I read elsewhere that someone said that the original heroine of this article was a good girl and did not follow the path of a vicious supporting actress who was jealous and framed the heroine. As a result, she only appeared in two of the first eighty chapters. She was also portrayed as a hypocrite who said to the victim, "Although he burns, kills, loots, and does all kinds of evil, he is not easy, so let's let him go." I guess it will be changed in the future, but the heroine's sighs and praise for her are really disgusting. It would be better to watch the vicious heroine confront her head-on. The author probably wanted to write something. The main plot of Chapter 80 was to find his life experience and revitalize the sect. As a result, the personal plot was fishing every day without practicing, and the revitalization plot was pushed so smoothly that it seemed like a dream. I wrote a bunch of stuff, the pacing is slow, and none of it is attractive. I originally wanted to give up on Chapter 29, but after some thought I settled on thirty, and then the first laugh point of this article appeared in Chapter 30. Heaven! Why are you doing this to me! My teeth are almost broken and I can't read fifty more chapters. The heroine is the reincarnation of a big demon, and she goes back to her previous life. She vows to reform the sect and promulgates a series of rules. How can she turn the evil demon sect into a law-abiding and good citizen in just one sentence? Dingdangxiang, a poor sect, still dared to build infrastructure and tourism. Later, he made a lot of money by selling magic weapons from his previous life, but he actually spent one million on paintings? Ah? ! He accepted a group of untalented victims as handyman disciples, and also took back the villagers who bullied him in his previous life and treated him well. The treatment given was very favorable, so where did the money come from? Rumor has it that the big devil does all kinds of evil and has boundless power. He wishes he could eat three children in one meal. The heroine has only one level of cultivation and has turned into a seven or eight-year-old. She is in charge of a group of disciples in the third and fourth realms who are obedient and dare not disobey because they don't know that the heroine has changed the core, and they are afraid of being beaten if they disobey. Then the heroine's apprentice took in three apprentices, all of whom were not very young. After knowing the heroine's identity, they bullied the heroine and found trouble with her. Ah? ? The heroine's apprentices are all extremely powerful, but as a result, they don't remember a single thing. They come and leave inexplicably, and their attitude towards the heroine is also inexplicable. There were many things I wanted to write about revitalizing the sect, improving my cultivation, discovering my life experience, and winning over disciples, but I couldn't get through any of them. It's rambling, inconsistent, and the rhythm is chaotic. How about calling the original body out and punching the earth. In fact, I really want to see the original heroine of the Virgin Mary, not just talking arrogantly, but really taking "making everyone happy" engraved in her heart and putting it into action. In fact, it's not just the Virgin Mary. Every character who moves forward firmly to put Hongda's career into practice is very moving when written.
The plot setting is quite good. I saw Chapter 70. Still can't stand it anymore. Reason 1: The plot is messy and rambling. One moment I want to engage in tourism, another moment I want to develop, and the next moment I go shopping for no reason. There are a lot of things I want to write about, but I don't write them in detail. I just ramble on and cover too much at once. A mess. 2: The character design is weird, I feel like I have lost my mind. For example, the protagonist's sect is extremely poor and needs to develop. I finally earned some spiritual stones by selling magic weapons. In the end, the protagonist used 1 million spiritual stones to buy calligraphy and paintings? Being lowered? What is the use of calligraphy and painting? This is a fairy tale. In the world of cultivating immortals, can props that are useless for cultivating immortals be sold for 1 million spiritual stones? ? The monetary system is in chaos. 3. Practice? I have never practiced. All in all, the writing is very messy.
Give it up, give it up, the more I look at it, the more confused I become. I personally don't like this kind of thing.
Can I say that the sense of substitution is not strong?
I'm here, I'm here, Qiqi is visiting Dada!
Come on, let's do some cruelty (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻
I stayed up late again, I really liked the plot, neither too fast nor too slow.
Very interesting, I keep watching. I'll also leave a message to prove that I'm watching.