Mortal Girl's Road to Immortality

Who could have imagined that I would be deceived by reading a cultivation novel and be fooled by the good reviews in the comment area. It's really not good. Please read the latest comments. This one is the most real.

Shuhuang was attracted by the title because he also wanted to see how mortals move towards the light step by step. But after reading Chapter 32 very seriously, I decided to give up. The reasons are as follows: 1. There are too many repeated words. Some item names can be introduced when they first appear, and they can be given a general name when they appear later. For example, the clothes that the Qin family distributed to their disciples kept repeating the name of the color + pattern. 2. At the beginning, the punctuation marks were too frequent, and commas were used in some places where no commas were needed. 3. There are too many descriptions of irrelevant content, and sometimes I skip reading without affecting the plot. I hope the author's next article will be even better, escape~

The age setting is too inconsistent. Character dialogues do not necessarily require the use of modesty. "I am" is used almost throughout the text, and "I" does not appear uneducated. Maybe I'll continue to watch it later, but so far it's too bland

After reading more than 130 chapters, I was ready to abandon the article. The author's writing style is not bad. The ancient measurement unit is feet, and the modern cubic meter is percent. It is very interesting to read, and the description is too straightforward, too straightforward! Just like keeping a running account, the author has no idea what the three major elements of the novel are, and it makes people sleepy. There are no contradictions, and there is no sequential advancement of the plot. The only lines are based on the levels of cultivating immortals. Which novel about cultivating immortals does not follow this line? There should be a story point, right? No! Furthermore, the author sets the age of the heroine to 6 years old, and has no basic foundation for literacy and reading. It is amazing that she can understand all the exercises after testing her spiritual roots. Even if she is a genius, her way of thinking and speaking tone should be like that of a child, but she is not. If you travel through time at an older age, you won't feel like a child at all. Just imagine a 6-year-old little pudding, practicing, fighting monsters, upgrading, building a house, and gaining experience on his own. It's hard to imagine that without the guidance of a teacher and relying entirely on self-taught, how could a 6-year-old little pudding be possible?

It's okay, but I'm not familiar with the author's rhythm at the beginning. The heroine Luo Qingci was only six years old at the beginning, but some of her actions were completely invisible, which made me forget her age. The pace became faster later on, and I got used to the fast pace later on.

3. I finished it. Now there is a real-life version of the book. It sounds like you are actually there.

The most objectionable thing is that there is too much nonsense, and the overall content is not very interesting. If you like to listen to books and fall asleep, you can come, and you will be able to fall asleep. It is simply too hypnotic. The plot is really bland and cannot be ignited. There will be no annoying monsters, no jealous maniacs, and no outrageous events to advance the plot.

It's so outrageous that the heroine can use the Foundation Establishment to withstand Nascent Soul's natal sword after absorbing the alien fire, and her combat power level is in a mess. Entering that secret realm to compete for rare life-extending pills was already outrageous. The protagonist was quite rich and dared to fight for things he couldn't buy. There was no cheating. The information collected was that there was a high chance of being silenced after entering the secret realm. The protagonist went crazy and started to fight for no reason without returning home.

The author has a great number of words! Just refine the talismans and report the total number! The quantity must be graded in detail. This kind of thing accounts for too much in one chapter. It is like this on two pages. The key is that the heroine refines the talisman every few chapters, and only does this once every few chapters.

It's a good book, but it's a bit of a running account at the front and it's better at the back.