A Journey at the End of the Jin Dynasty

In fact, when I say that your writing is good, I just mean that it is more suitable for my taste. It is neither dull nor angry, and develops slowly. This is suitable for human nature. If it is invincible and enjoyable at the beginning, then it is basically useless. But this is only my opinion and does not represent young people. After all, I am old. Come on, old man!

The writing is very good, I like it

She is actually a female general who has a name in history. She has improved her posture.

Overthrow the Sima family's broken Jin Dynasty and put an end to this tragic and troubled world

The overall writing is okay, a bit messy, and there is a typo. Is there a woman like Yang Xianrong in history?

What kind of thing is this written? I can't stand it, I forcefully pretend to be cool, it's grinding, I'm exhausted just looking at it, thinking about this and that.

The plot is scattered and the ideas are not smooth and clear enough.

Does the author want to be scolded to death?

Momojiji, I am speechless when you keep emphasizing your three views of modern people. In such an environment, indecisiveness has long been eliminated. Alas, idealists have become empty in the end!

When I saw the founding name of the country, Hua Wu, I couldn't stand it. Hua Wu, isn't it hard to pronounce? Hua Wu, Hua Wu, wow, wow, in all dynasties, I can't find the two words for the country's name.