World Shadow

One or two years in a psychiatric hospital, it was terrible

Come on, may you become a god soon! !

The writing is for sure. It's just that the world view is too grand. It was okay when I first watched it, and I found it very interesting. I feel confused after that. If I unfold it step by step, it will probably be easier to read and write (the reason why the cultivation system is so popular). Take your time and tell the story you want to tell. In short, let's sum up the experience and lessons, and it doesn't necessarily have to be hanging from a tree. The worst case scenario is to rearrange it, clarify the outline, and start from scratch.

Gold shines everywhere, and everyone wants to have talents under his command!