The Five Realms All Compete to Spoil Me

I only read a few chapters and didn't want to continue reading. I couldn't accept that Yao Shen Guan was super talented and had good cultivation, but he was actually taken to General Luo's Mansion to be the shadow guard of the baby Luo Yuyan. Who is a man of integrity who is willing to be someone else's servant, with life and death controlled by someone else? To be a disciple of a sect with such a good talent is not much better than the current people. . The heroine Luo Yuyan was lucky enough to be born into the General's Mansion and became the only girl to win the favor of the General's Mansion. Because of his own willfulness, the maid shadow guard around him was always punished by Grandpa Luo. He doesn't care about the people around him either. The background of the person who was related to the heroine in the past life is always written in such a powerful way. To live a new life, we must save the common people. Can't we write about an ordinary heroine who becomes a strong person through hard work? It must involve the background, resources, and connections of the previous life. Couldn't the heroine become a strong person without these vests? Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

It was okay at first, but then... It was a mess.

Super sad, especially the first fifty chapters

It's fine in the front, but the more I write in the back, the more messy it becomes. It's a mess. I'm convinced.

In fact, this book is quite enjoyable if you read it carefully. There are just some plot points that I didn't understand. Everyone loves Luo Yuyan, and I hope the author will give her a lot of support.

After reading about fifty chapters, my personal feeling is: the writing is not that good! The plot is boring and the sentences don't make sense. What kind of skills are used to cultivate immortality? The fighting is perfunctory. I hope the author can work hard! Looking forward to the next good book

Everything is good, just some typos

The hero's name is very similar to a novel I read

As the saying goes, half a city is full of mist and half a city is full of sorrow. As a group favorite novel, it is still worth watching.

It was very confusing. In the end, I went through time travel. I even checked it and it turned out that it was not a time travel book.