Lord of the Infinite

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I've finished reading the book. The plot is okay, but the writing still lacks some strength. But if it's the first book, I'm pretty talented. I think the plot could use more twists.

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Is this a repeat of the first paragraph...

The plot of this book is full of ups and downs, and the various scenes are described in detail and wonderfully. The more you read, the more hysterical you become! The more I watch, the more I want to follow it!

I just took a look at the group and found that this book has entered the top 20 in the monthly voting list. I opened Zongsheng and took a quick look. Now I have some comments. The title of the book doesn't say much, it's neither brilliant nor poisonous, just average. The introduction just made me stupid, also known as "Slave to Control All Living Beings"? **Brother, are you serious? The introduction is the reader's first impression. Are you here to enslave all sentient beings? ? ? What is the most important thing about writing a book? Empathy! You have to find a way to arouse empathy between the reader and the protagonist. You... Who would be willing to treat yourself as a slave? If the protagonist in your content is a slave, there are only two processes. The first is to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. Yes, this routine is easy to use, but who can pretend to be a slave by pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? In the second process, the protagonist starts out as a slave, and gradually becomes stronger through acquired struggles and gets rid of his humble status. There's nothing wrong with it, but the process will definitely be slow, but think about it, how would you choose books if you were a reader? Either it is written by an old author, or you can find it from rankings or recommendations. You will probably decide whether to read the book or not after just one glance at the book title and introduction. The first sentence of your introduction will dissuade 70% of the readers, and the remaining 30% will enter. Assuming that the second process I mentioned is followed, can the identity of the protagonist's slave quickly trigger a explosive point? It is unrealistic for the slave to slap others in the face at the beginning, so the pace will definitely not be fast, and as I said before, his getting stronger is a slow process. How many readers do you think will have the patience and are willing to read on? ? ? It is recommended that the author read more about the beginning of the book. Most of them briefly introduce the background to let the readers understand what the book is about, which indirectly reduces the reading interest. Then the remaining words and ink fully describe the protagonist and push the readers to the next level within the limited space. As for your introduction, after I read it, I have no idea what it is about. It's so cool that I'm just embarrassed... Let's try another one. I am the most ruthless person in the world of trolling. I am a good reader and reviewer of books. I am the one who is the most ruthless person in Wushan and Qingtian.

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