Jin Yi Chang'an

Can the author provide more updates?

Updates are so slow, and many chapters heavily duplicate the previous one.

Abandoned in Chapter 11, very boring, boring

The first few chapters are a mess.

This ending is sad

Then what? Then what? I can't help but look at it, it whets my appetite.

The first half is exciting, but you can't take it back afterward. Some characters disappear as soon as they are written, and some foreshadowings have no follow-up. In general, the expansion is huge, the extension is sparse, and the ending is inexplicable.

The writing is very good, especially the description of the environment. When listening to books, I will read these good sentences over and over again. Some of the pictures depicting the capital city have a feeling similar to the Qingming Mountains and Rivers Pictures, which are very grand. When I wrote those chapters about the desert, I felt like I was there.

Only updated one chapter in half a month

The author's writing is so wonderful that it could be made into a TV series